Heaven’s ballet makes ready
Her recital is drawing near
Dancers gather in darkened clouds
The earth anxiously awaits
Curtains open, thunder applauds
A performance to remember
Crystal streams dance playfully
Tickling the mountainsides
Life flows to the needy basin
Rivers form in natural splendor
Un-harnessed force divides the dell
Nature's perfect renewal
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Reviews of "The Splendor of Rain (Two Japanese Sijo's)"
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
Kudo's to you.. This is truly exceptional Lori. What a refreshing look at nature (smile)
But both were great
Joel
Sandie Angel :o)