Excellent example of your creativity Lori. The Senryus were all well done and read like headlines to what goes on in this sad world of ours. Odd, that I understood the 3rd stanza the most. Many people do not realize that the United Nations can sometimes be the biggest obstacle to permanent world peace, even if that was what the original intent when it was created, was.
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Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Lori, I can see this has been carefully thought through, but I wondered about the 3rd Senryu... 'United Nations a threat to the free world...' ? Am I missing something?
i never knew,but then i am ignorant.but i know what i like,and i like this.simple short to the point. thanks for showing me a new form.and tanks,,,,,,for "spastic"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
Thanks for the demenstration of Senryu. Nice write!
these senryu are terrific! i loved them all, think the first, fourth and sixth really stand out. WELL DONE, LORI!! thank you for sharing... :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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first senryu I ever read with the line ~take it up the ass~
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