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Shadow Dreams (Japanese Sedoka)
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Dreaming in shadows, shapeless lovers satisfy my unfulfilled desires... Hungry for freedom reality awakens... Spirits dance within my heart.
Sedoka is a very old form. Originally, It has 6 lines, totaling in 38 syllables in the following from: 5,7,7,5,7,7. Sedoka usually has at least one poetic twist within it’s structure.

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Reviewed on October 15, 2002

Really cool. I didn't know about Japanese Sedokas.
Tiffany

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on October 5, 2002

you always catch me with your writings.

Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2002

i'm a sucker for good short poems. fuckin great!

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Reviewed on September 28, 2002

You've done a beaitiful job Lori, Hmmm I might try one of these! Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Excellent Lori...how DO you do it?

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

works well on the tongue...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Lori thank you for sharing so many forms and the info on them , you do them all so eloquently...this one is superb!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

You never cease to amaze me! Such eloquent words...& within *boundaries* no less! Simply amazing!

Reviewed by atomar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Pleasant tone and vivid image.
Sometimes I like minimalism...

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

outstanding, but too many rules for me

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Another exceptional wwrite sweetie. Loved this one.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Excellent write...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

I enjoy playing around with the Japanese poetry and have enjoyed reading this and learning about this way of doing it.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2002

Great poem, Lori. Beautiful image of dancing spirits. Freedom is being spontaneous, not holding back.

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