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I'd promise you forever,
if it were up to me.
I'd promise you a cloudless day,
and a glassy crystal sea.
I'd promise you a city,
where roses never die.
Where love can wait forever,
and lovers never cry.
But alas, my love,
as my hearts breaks,
my mind is forced to see...
That time and space will not allow,
our love to be set free.
How I wish I understood,
the things I cannot see...
the dynamics of a fallen dream...
the purpose of a dreamers scene...
the reasons for a promise spent...
the truths our words should represent...
these simple things are often hard for me...
As I sit and reminisce,
and dream the dream of our first kiss,
the sights and sounds that lovers see, I see...
I think of you,
and what I've lost
I count the everlasting cost
and know within that love will never be...
Yet you my love,
my dream of dreams,
yes you my love will always be to me,
the one I'll hold within my heart,
my hidden fantasy...
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J.
But I really love your writing there is such a musical and tonal quality to it.
And it is a pleasure to read.
Amor
I am in love with your stanza....
"How I wish I understood,
the things I cannot see...
the dynamics of a fallen dream...
the purpose of a dreamers scene...
the reasons for a promise spent...
the truths our words should represent...
these simple things are often hard for me... "
I see the truth in your words
Brian
I am in love with your stanza....
"How I wish I understood,
the things I cannot see...
the dynamics of a fallen dream...
the purpose of a dreamers scene...
the reasons for a promise spent...
the truths our words should represent...
these simple things are often hard for me... "
I see the truth in your words
Brian
Caryn
between
speak a quiet message
enjoyed it ms
Audrey, Your poetry friend!
It's all been said sweets, just wanted you to know that I was by. Janet xoxoxo
Roses Never Die, They Just Wilt, but, Human
Beings Die & They Rot In There Graves...
TRASK
It's all been said...
Beautiful, yet so sad.
Thanks,
Trixie
This poem was so beautiful yet very sad,I felt your heartache and related well to it.Your work is beautiful.
sincerely,
from
kay
Love and Light
dreamweaver