A Part of Me (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 12, 2008

A touching piece between mother and daughter. Lovely. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed on September 7, 2008

You have so simply, yet, extraordinarily explained how a parent reflects on their child. You are a master/mistress of word and thought.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 30, 2008

Beautifully said and felt Cryssa!, as you crafted a heartfelt sentiment about a spirit of love (within you both) that will never part!
Happy moving also! Stay SAFE and Happy!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Oh, Cryssa...this touches the heart. So lovely.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

Beautiful and sincere... love the way you have used the Editor to make this just so special and so clear. Now your heart has an extra beat and skip in its step! :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

If this means what I think it does, YIPEE!

...a home filled with little ones-- a lotta hope... and a heap o' love. --Charlie

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 19, 2008

Very beautiful, Cryssa

Mary

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 19, 2008

Beautifully written Cryssa
Short excellnt write Left me longing for more
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 18, 2008

A beautiful write with a hint of mystery, a lot of love, heartfelt emotion only as a mother could write, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 18, 2008

Very nice!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

As the others have said, this is touching, Cryssa, but I also enjoy the mystery of the thought that we don't know something is missing until its space in our life is fulfilled....Jerry

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

I'm sure your daughter is lucky to have a wonderful mother like yourself in her life that displays affection and gives out the greatest unconditional love that a mother can give to a daughter.This poem reflects it.I enjoy reading this poem.take care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

A very nice poem and a special tribute to your daughter!
I wrote poems for my daughters as well. They have framed copies!
Blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Like filling small holes inside with some permanent fix which make us feel better, until it is a part of ourselves.

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

...beautiful write...someone so close...will always be a part...of you... and never be apart..from you.
the heart fulfilled Cryssa...
John

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Simply beautiful, Cryssa; God bless you and your daughter!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

so very lovely!

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

The geometry of love
between a mother and a daughter.
Always changing and forever the same.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Oh how reverently loving, a mother and child, there is no love like it is there? Sweet words to share as they leave the nest...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Oh they do grow up and go away, but then they come back when they realize they kinda, maybe, like us sometimes. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Cryssa,

The complete picture of love and acceptance - beautifully penned, this portrait of FAMILY. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Beautiful and touching lines for your beloved daughter. God bless you and God bless her.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Love fulfilled in this delicate romantic poem.