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Sardines, A Goat and A Bridge
by Janice Beaty Hamilton → (All Poetry by Janice Beaty Hamilton)
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The car - a sardine can with wheels
Racing up, down and around
Train tracks on mountain slopes
Six vacationing fish
All oiled up for the occasion
Anxiously peer through windows
Dreaming of a can opener
A steering wheel confused
On the wrong side of the car
Turns back and forth
At the force of the drive

They ride
All anxiously quiet
Being in a first time place
Then…
A wooden bridge ahead
The noisy wheels rumbling
Loudly over the planks.
Seemingly rehearsed just for this moment
A goat and her young appear
Crossing the wooden bridge
The mama goat glares
At the noisy touring sardines
Baaaaa – she scolds…
A peculiar moment of silence follows…
And then, a burst of hysterical laughter
The six sardines liberate gut-wrenching guffaws
With tears flowing… laughing
At what, they weren’t quite sure…

But they are later to recognize
That life’s most enjoyable times
Have nothing to do with places or things
But have everything to do with
Who you spend that time with
While taking pleasure
In the simplest of things… 
 
All is well with the world…
And the only affirmation, is laughter!
 
Rumble, rumble, rumble… Baaaaaaaaaaa

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sardines, A Goat and A Bridge"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 12, 2011
THE WORD SAYS, '...LAUGHTER...IS MEDICINE...' BUT WHO COULD HAVE GUESSED THAT THE APPEARANCE OF A GOAT AND HER YOUNG CROSSING A WOODEN BRIDGE WOULD HAVE PROVOKED THIS MARVELOUS BALM...SO NEEDED AND ENJOYED AMONG FRIENDS. GREAT IMAGERY IN THIS EXCELLENT WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Just adorable! Thanks for sharing.
Connie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Cleverly and meaningfully expressed, Janice. Well done! Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
LOL, this was so refreshing, love that opening stanza, had me thinking of these sheep books for kids by an author with the last name of Shaw-anyway, this was really creative with some fantastic imagery, good job.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 16, 2008
there is creativity here of tremendous depth Janice Beaty Springs -- a great analogy, a humorous story and poetry of rich imagination --
it is always so good to read your work -- I go away with a refreshed feeling each time -- sans those we care for, to share life's joys, there is no joy -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 16, 2008
Good poem that you have written,take care

Edwin


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