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My Venus
by Ed J. → (All Poetry by Ed J.)
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In myown life this poem is still unfulfilled lacking the name to be given Venus. This version I dedicate to two deserving hearts, Eddy and Chanti with my best wishes.

 

Poseidon bowed in query
As to Zeus he makes his plea
This protected heart grows weary
In my waters cold and deep
 ...continued...
 
Copyright© 2009 Ed J
 

 

 
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 Reviews of "My Venus"
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
Aw, this is so precious, a beautifully tender write. Holly
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Methinks you KNOW what a Twin Flame is!

Beautiful work..

Blessings,

Vesna ( Croatia)
Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on April 20, 2009
Very impressive work with substance and depth from it's core. Your friend, Kathy
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Such a heart touching pen, may his prayer be answered.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
You picked two romantics and gave them a lovely poem to cherish together...Beautifully done!...

Eileen
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
Excellent poem,beautifully written,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
a lovely write
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Truly beautiful...nothing more needs to be said.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
well said
Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Hey...I thought I was the immortal one... :)



Thanks for the dedication Ed...a first for me too...usually I just get death threats and hate mail here..kidding ;)



Wonderful write...enjoyed!!!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Oh how lovely and endearing, such warmth in thise precious words.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
I was hoping you wouldn't mind. Best of everything to both Eddy and you, Chanti.

Ed
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Wow, this has to be a first for me. Thank you for this beautiful poem. I will treasure it and although I know Eddy isn't quite as mushy as I am, he will appreciate it just as much. I count myself to be extremely fortunate to know love. Only a poet could express it so well :-)
Best... Chanti
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
A romantic masterpiece of True Love!
Wonderful, encompassing, and totally breath-taking!

Cynthia
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The longing to hold my angel and never let her out of my heart beyond life. The photo is the pink quartz heart ginen me to open my heart.
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