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Rub a Dub Dub!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Oh, you should all have a friend like Abby!


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Rub a Dub Dub!

 

I went to visit a dear old friend to see her new home.

When our husbands left we were finally alone.

“You seem so stressed,” my friend said to me.

And I truly was, but how could she see?

 

“That’s it," she said, "I’m gonna pamper you!"

Get down on the floor and take off your shoes.

She got out her lotions, oils and stuff,

Starting massaging my back, at times getting rough.

 

But it felt so good every knot being release,

She found every one of those tight little beasts.

Oh, it felt good in spite of the pain,

You’d swear she was a therapist and highly trained.

 

When she was finished, I laid feeling content.

Oh, I’m not finished yet, she said while still bent.

She went to the bathroom and filled the tub,

Putting in bubbles and getting out mud.

 

“What is she doing?”  I thought she’s gone mad.

She’s spoiling me rotten, but deep down was glad.

She got out the candles and told me, “get in.”

I did as I was told, as she poured me some gin.

 

I lay in the tub feeling pampered and prized.

The candles were flickering in front of my eyes.

I didn’t understand them as they flickered so bright,

Until she left the room and turned out the light.

 

Written for Abby, who spoiled me rotten.  I love you Abby.

 

 

By Bonnie Johnson-May
 
 


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 Reviews of "Rub a Dub Dub!"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
what a very special friend--

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Gee, wish there were more people in this world like her! Hmmmm, a mud bath to relax in, all by candle light, sounds so relaxing....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
...when compassion and good old heart...is found in a friend such as this one...the ink seems to just jump right off of the page with love.
wonderful remembrance and memoir...of a true friend...
John

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
It sounds Heavenly! May I ask, ahem, where does Abby live? (My neck hurts, Abby....Oh, Abby, be a dear.....Did you know Bonnie's a GREAT friend of mine? [I just met her on AD]....I'll bring the bubbles....)

Enviously,
Connie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
This is a very touching tribute to a friend who just knows. :)
Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
What would we do without friends like Abby! I love this poem Bonnie!
It's a wonderful tribute to friendship!

Love,
ET

Reviewed on February 10, 2008
We all should have a friend like Abby; send her to Texas! She can rub our arthritic joints and ease Karla's back/neck/fibromyalgia pain! :) Karla's long overdue for another massage; she had one on her cruise three years ago, and she was in HEAVEN!

Delightful write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Nothing like a good rub down to untie the knots in our body.

Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Sounds delightful, Bonnie, could use one of those. LOL Well done! Off to the tub!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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