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I Thought I Saw a Robin!
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I am so anxious for spring! I'm seeing things.


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I Thought I Saw a Robin!
 
I thought I saw a Robin sitting in the tree,
It was so exciting knowing flowers I’d soon see.
The feelings of spring soon invaded my essence,
The smells, the colors, the pure effervescence.
 
I tried to get a better view of this precious little bird.
Tiptoeing not to scare him, I must have looked absurd.
Finally I got close enough to get a better view.
But all I saw was one old crow, before he got up and flew.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 

 


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Reviewed by Jordan Dobrowski (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
You weren't lying about your sight being bad. HAHA. This poem is really cute though I like it Ma'Ma!!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
wishful thinking,, but,, it will be very soon,, a sign of Spring! :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Dear Bonnie, did you see a Robin Bird or a Robin Hood on a tree? I am a little confused as I saw myself the Sheriff of Nottingham bugging people with taxes (aren't taxes days around?)
If it was a Robin Bird...hoorray for you, Spring is there! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
...did that once myself Bonnie...I made a mistake...it was the bottle of old crow...I left in the yard. (just kidding)
taking all your writing in light...
John

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
HeeHeeHee...you tickle me again, Bonnie! Fine fittin' poem, that I hope indicates a fine fittin' good day for you today! Cheers...

Micke

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
pretty funny--i have seen a few here--

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
This is funny! The old crow had the last laugh. Now, if you'd move back to Shamokin, you would be seeing robins for sure because Bill and I saw a flock in a field we passed yesterday. And my tulips are coming up--how exciting is that!!!

Love ya, Bon!
Con

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Cute and I'm waiting for the first sight of this magnificent harbinger of Spring.


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