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Lost My Priceless Ring!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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This was such a precious memory for me, I couldn't resist putting in a poem. I hope you enjoy reading it as I sure did writing it.


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Lost My Priceless Ring!
 
Before we had our mountain, we went camping quite a bit.
We always loved the outdoors, & the mountains surely fit.
One time we took our granddaughter, for she loved them too.
She was so much fun to take, from the time she was just two.
 
This particular summer, she was five and she just lost a tooth.
She worried about the fairy finding her, she didn’t know the truth.
So we reassured her firmly, the tooth fairy would come that night.
She would never forget Jordie, for that would not be right.
 
Jordie’s tooth was under the pillow, when I tucked her in her bed.
A few hours later, I slipped the money under her sleeping little head.
It was very cold that night and I shivered all night through.
I slept a little, but my hands and toes, began turning blue.
 
As I awoke, I had to go potty and ran outside to go.
As cold as it was that day, I thought it was gonna snow.
I put the coffee on and tried to restart the embers to the fire.
By the time the others woke up, I was pretty tired.
 
My hands were still cold & I rubbed them off and on.
That’s when I finally noticed, that my precious ring was gone.
I searched everywhere I wandered and others helped me as well.
For it was a very valuable ring, and too sentimental to tell.
 
We searched for hours and finally realized, it was truly gone.
Accepting I would never find it, even if I looked all week long.
Feeling sad and despondent, I tried to carry on.
Thinking of things to do that day, for ways of having fun.
 
That was when we heard Jordie, letting out a scream.
It came from our tent a distance away, alongside the stream.
She ran and skipped to greet us, waving a dollar in the air.
“Look what the Fairy gave me,” I could only stare.
 
She was so excited, she started to dance and sing.
For on her chubby little finger, was my precious, priceless ring.
“Look what the fairy put under my pillow, she found me like you said.”
It must have slipped off my finger when I tucked her in her bed.
 
What a dilemma I was in, I wasn’t sure what I should do.
I loved this child with all my heart, but I’m fond of that ring too.
So I said, “Oh my precious little child, Grandma lost a tooth too, “
That ring was for me my darling, the dollar was for you!”
 
 Written by,
Bonnie May

 


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 Reviews of "Lost My Priceless Ring!"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Quick thinking! Oh, the "stories" we tell to our children (and grandchildren obviously) all in the name of traditions. hee, hee...

Cryssa

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
...what a great story you share with us Bonnie...and your happy ending...clever then...and now.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
So cute,,,:)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
A clever Grandma is more worth than a "thousand and one night" stories
That end was superb! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
"Oh my precious little child, Grandma lost a tooth too," - You were so clever with that!!! I'm so glad you have the ring back!!!

Once I thought I had lost the diamond ring that my grandmother had given to me, and I was sad for the whole day. I looked for it everywheere and could not find it so I accepted the fact it was lost and gone. But somehow two days later while I wasn't looking my daughter has found it for me. Imagine the joy I had in seeing that ring again.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Cute Bonnie, had me going there for a minute. Have I ever told you about the time I place brownies on the table to cool and next to the brownies was my engagement ring that my German Shepherd ate along with a tray full of hot brownies? We took him to the Vet, had him X-rayed and there in his intestines was my engagement ring! One day I will enlighten you to the rest of the story. Great writing dear lady....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Bonnie, this poems tells a beautiful story of love and caring...your words bring so many fantastic visuals to this reader's mind. I truly liked this a lot.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Till the end I was all ready to bring my metal detector and go searching at the campsite for your ring...but this ending was much more fun...good poem...Ed

Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Precious treasure - well done, Bonnie! What a gift she got!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
this is truly precious!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Lol. What quick thinking. So was your granddaughter happy enough with the dollar? This is just a great poem. Love it. Liz

Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Wonderful write, Bonnie; always a joy reading/reviewing you! Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
You did the right thing and got your ring back. Such camping experiences you have, you are in difficulties always. But I enjoyed this one and she is so cute in photo.


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