AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Rochelle Brandon, iSam Vaknin, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, iR.E.E.S Blogs Linda Smith, Publisher, iChristina Neely, iNeenah Davis-Wilson, iEdie Batstone, iKarin Adams, iD.E.Z. Butler, i

  Home > Humor > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Bonnie Lou May

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 629 Titles
· 6,546 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jan, 2008

Bonnie Lou May, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Mountain Man
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

The picture above is of Gary Birkholz, a dear friend and the poem below is one of the many stories of him.


Poem Artwork

 

Mountain Man
 
There’s a man we know quite well and have for many years.
We celebrated many great joys and we shared many tears.
His sense of humor is well known to everyone around.
We couldn’t have found a better friend in this whole entire town.
 
When he walked in one day he was dressed like a Mountain Man.
He really was authentic because he does own mountain land.
He & my husband, the other Mountain Man, went on a little trip.
They would only be gone a day, no need for me to flip.
 
They arrived in the mountains but a blizzard came at night
There was no way to get out now, no human was in sight.
They only took enough food for a day, so they pictured a bleak end.
If they could get a call out, what crazy person would they send?
 
What were the Notorious Mountain Men to do, for they were the best around?
Very few men had their experience, especially the ones in town.
But there was a sheriff in town, who knew both men real well,
He notified the rescue team, exactly where this pair dwell.
 
It took days to get to them for they were far back in the woods.
They rationed all the food they had and all their earthly goods.
The Mountain Men finally spotted the rescue party getting near.
“Oh, thank God we’re saved, and getting out of here.”
 
But the razzing and humiliation they took from the entire rescue team.
Made them want to turn around and go back to the mountain stream.
They lost their Mountain Men image that day on the mountain peak.
And every time someone mentions it, they get timid and meek.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 
 

 

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Mountain Man"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Pretty funny... hee, hee...
If only bad reputations were as easy to get rid of as good reputations seem to be...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
I really liked your poem . A good point was made!.....M

Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Bonnie I really enjoyed the poetic narrative immensely, wording perfect and imagery right on point.

Thank you for sharing your "Mountain Man"
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Cute, wonderful tale of damaged pride....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
so cute!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
...in lost and found...a great story of return...written well...holds no meekness in its word...except for those who were there...and hear its echo.
well done Bonnie...
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
A fine tribute, Bonnie. As for the photo, there's obviously a "glitch" in the system. I cannot add a photo either. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Don't need the picture, Bonnie, you illustrated it well in verse - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Bonnie, this is really well written...the visual images caused this reader's mind to run wild. I'll bet those "Mountain Men" think twice before they go to the mountains again. This was a great story & I enjoyed it tremendously.

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Well...they surely learned their lesson, these Notorious Mountain Men! Ya go to the Mountains, ya go prepared :o) Glad they came down the mountain intact.
Blessings and Love ~ Micke

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Fortunately no mountains around here, hell not even a sanddune to get lost on...but I know their feelings as I have been lost at sea in the past in a small boat not made for deep sea adventures...oh well, guess I better stay on the beach...Ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
To be lost and then to be found safe is a feeling you never forget,,,, great story
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
So rescue team members are real people, too? Razzing the victims is not what we see on tv. They must have been so glad to know your mountain men were safe. Meanwhile, back in town, Bonnie was probably a nervous wreck. I know the feeling, since Bill is an adventurous guy in his own way. What would we do without them?

Love, your Sis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Take the picture to JPG (from 72 to 300 dpi)and you will have an uploading just like that..."...(I am doing something with my fingers and noise is involved)
Been a few times on a few mountains, although, I don't reccomend to get lost on the Victoria mountains of east Australia.
Good story, the man?..so...so...

Georg

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Isn't it an irony how two brave men can have their egos bruised so easily? Excellent write!

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Very brave 2 men on the mountain and waiting to be found. Must have been quite an experience but will not stop them from going again. Liked this write. When the mountain fever gets them off they go don't they? I guess they think they are free there but they leave worry behind for their wives and families til they are home again.

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
They should be rewarded for their survival skill and bravery!!! Thank you for sharing, Bonnie!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)


New Poetry by Bonnie Lou May
Popular Poetry (Humor)
  1.  Little Folk, Cousins Make A Pit Stop
  2.  If I Could Be A Super Hero
  3.  Fried Chicken
  4.  An Adventurous Reinterpretation of Mid
  5.  Like Ducks in Paper Trousers
  6.  Laughing As I Flee...
  7.  A Salt and Batter
  8.  Amazing Grapes
  9.  Newfangled Things
  10.  Milkman's letter
  11.  A Writer Named Ron
  12.  Ode to Spamophobia
  13.  The Last Second
  14.  Porky Pig And Daffy Duck
  15.  My First Heart Attack
  16.  Houston Greats
  17.  Atlanta Belle
  18.  Burst Forth
  19.  Flocking
  20.  Bad Boy
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part IV by Jay Dubya

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part IV is adult literature featuring adult content and language that satirizes thirteen famous short fiction works.  
Member BookAds

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part IV by Jay Dubya

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part IV is adult literature featuring adult content and language that satirizes thirteen famous short fiction works.  
Member BookAds

Bayou Valentine by Riley Blake

Fortune Redding faces her fears in an unlikely situation and barely escapes with her life.  
Member BookAds