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No Germs for Me!
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Gee whiz, I knew I looked bad but...............


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No Germs for Me!
 
Gee, my husband just got home from his hunting trip.
“You look like death warmed over, it was no Freudian slip.”
I do look pretty awful ‘cause I’ve been really sick.
But he didn’t have to point it out so darn quick.
 
I’ve seen the mirror and person lookin back at me.
I know how bad I look, I’m not blind, I can see.
Well, he didn’t look that great neither unshaven nor bathed.
I came back with a retort that left him totally unscathed.
 
“Yea, well you don’t smell good, I told him in no uncertain terms.”
“My girl, my problem can be cured in a shower not like your germs?”
“Oh it’s good to have you home,” I said sarcastically.
He just kissed the top of my head and said, “No germs for me!”
 
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Bonnie May
 

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Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2008
Cute little writing.


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
cute write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
“Yea, well you don’t smell good, I told him in no uncertain terms.”

I think that's my wife's favorite line - she always says I smell like a dog - but I like that smell! (Must be the wolfman in me.)

And hope you're feeling better soon.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Oh my,you are too funny sweet lady..wonderful writing as always..I sure have missed you...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Hope he tends to you while you are sick and cleans up and showers and takes over for you til you are on the mend. I know Jim will do that he is a super husband.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Well, from your photograph at least you are upright, that is a beginning! Now concentrate on getting well, love ya.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Bonnie,

Adorable! Your husband needs a swift kick in the, as my grandma always said, "sit down place"!

Mary

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Love it Bonnie...too funny.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Poor guy, he comes home, bringing you meat for winter, and you don't drag him into bed to welcome him home...you guys have been married TOO long...;-) ed

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
That's when I'd cough on him and say, Here. You want them so badly?? You can HAVE them! Turnabout is fair play, I say!! Poor you; hope you feel better soon! You're in my prayers! Cute write, though; well done, Bonnie!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
I had to laugh...sorry... but reminded me of when Joe got smarty with me in the car and I had to point out that he was stinky....no shower, yet he thought I was supposed to be thrilled to have him at my side...heheh... anyway... my feelings were hurt.... and yours should have been too... altho I'm sure he didn't really mean to hurt you... men just can be so strange.... duh.... Hurry and get well missy... and I mean it!!!!! lindalaw

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
He should have gone a few more days, I know you can't shot germs!

Georg


Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Some men are very uncaring, even if they didn't really mean to hurt you, but it did; and you have to point it out to him.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
(((Bonnie))),

Hope you're feeling better SOON. Adorable write and piccy!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
So cute Bonnie, I hope you feel better and he got his shower so he smells better.


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