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Crystal Blue Persuasion
by Poets Soul → (All Poetry by Poets Soul)
Saturday, August 13, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Some eyes just capture the soul.


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Crystal blue persuasion in your eyes-

Draw me closer to you tonight,

Lay me there in the softness of your reflection-

Bathed in the warmth of your tears,

Hold me now, don’t turn away - don’t blink 

And shut your eyes and wash me away,

Becoming a memory that silently runs down your face.

 

 Crystal blue persuasion captured in my eyes,

As I look at you and remember your love,

Wanting to slowly breathe you inside of me

And touch the beautiful essence of who you are,

Sweet are the memories that you whisper still – in the night-

When I hold you close to the heart that beats for you,

And remember how you laid your crystal blue persuasion on me.

 

 Crystal blue persuasion softly saying it all-

And I listened to every word said, yes, every word said,

The same beautiful words that set me free to love-

Were the same words that made me surrender to you

There in the center of your beautiful paradise – feeling alive-

Held by the reflection worn on my dreams of you,

And the crystal blue persuasion of our endless love.

 


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 Reviews of "Crystal Blue Persuasion"
Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on August 15, 2022
i find your piece very magnetic, big bro. they are indeed windows of the soul. i love the way you used crystal blue persuasion, indeed such befitting words.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 15, 2022
You have nearly captured all of life with your magical phrase...
"Crystal blue persuasion." Superb!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 14, 2022
Your title immediately reminded me of that beautiful classic song by Tommy James and the Shondells. Unlike the others, I found this poem to be a bit forced. Your other poems are much more romantic.

Please let me know what drug creates a change in pupils making them larger and heart-shaped. It will be the love drug of choice for everyone after that.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 14, 2022
There is a hypnotic quality to the rhythmic lines of this poem that is intense and powerful. The title is perfect (I'm a stickler for titles) as its symbolism runs emphatically throughout the poem. Excellent.

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2022
Beautiful words as always!

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on August 13, 2022
You say it softly and so well, no need to do any other thing but read gently and absorb the well seeded words of passion and love. Its like a gentle caress on the skin, Thank you


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