No one is better off alone. If there is someone you care about, see them often.
She told herself she didn’t mind
The lonely double bed
She said she liked her freedom
The solitude inside her head
She swore she enjoyed her traveling
Doing it all her way, on her own
She said don’t worry a bit about me
I’m much better off alone
Every year she grew older
And of course grew more alone
Till at last she seldom left her house
To see children long since grown
They don’t miss me she sighed
And I’ve ever so much to do
I’m cataloging my photographs
And searching for a long lost shoe
She baked cookies every year
Cakes, pies and candy too
But every year it went to waste
She had no one to send it to
She died one night in her bed
After weeks of suffering on her own
Cause no one thought to check on her
She said she was better off alone
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Reviews of "Better Off Alone"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
A poignant write about the lonliness that people so often create for themselves. Yes, 'tis much better to surround one's self with loving friends and family.
~Joseph
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
What a message wrapped in perfection of rhyme and flow.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Sue you always will be where you place yourself. Sometimes a person has to be aroused from a deep sleep. Quite a revealing poem. Bill
Wow.. sounds like my end... So my husband says... Thinks I don't let anyone in.. Ahh but what does he know.. Great write!! And I don't mind going alone.. It was the way I was born.. the way I lived.. why change now.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
BLIIIIIMEY an excellent poem..
Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
This is great writing and wonderful message reminding us that no one should have be alone,,Charlie
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