Dear Jesus
Can I be an angel
What can I do
I want to go to heaven
Do you need me too
I promise I'll be good
I'll dance around your throne
Mommy won't even notice
That I'm gone
Angel's don't bleed
Or do they cry
They bounce cloud to cloud
On wings that fly
Angel's don't hurt
From a body black and blue
Jesus, please take me
To heaven with you
Angel's aren't scared
They don't feel no pain
They don't lay on sheets
With crimstone bloodstains
Angel's don't have bruises
Or cry in the night
Angel's don't hide in closets
To keep out of sight
Angel's don't hurt
From a body black and blue
Jesus, please take me
To heaven with you
I love your writing, I am so glad you visited my site. God has a purpose for each and every one of us, your poetry with it's beauty, and compassion will bring someone out Linda, it will be the light that they need to get where you are and where you are going. I am so sorry for what you went through, But there was a reason, and from your reviews I think you know that too. God bless!!!
Oh Linda, I am stunned!
Riveting poem! The daughter or son is abused
and wants to go to heaven with Jesus. WOW!
This,I understand! You are a DAMN GOOD POET!
(Poetess) BRAVA! (The correct terminology)
Love,
Becca
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Straight to my heart.......you are a most gifted and beautiful person.....write on Linda......write on......
ty, Dani
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
This made me cry!! Very powerful write, and done with such compassion! May the Heavenly Angels watch over you, Dear Poet!
So touching Linda. Angel's don't have physical bodies. It's really a pain living in the body at times. It would be nice to exist in pure angel energy. Nice poetic Angel write. l&p G
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Oh dearest Linda how I have missed your writes so beautiful, sharing and caring from a golden heart...YOU!!!! This is soooooooo beautiful and touching and brought back some real painful memories of things my husband and I are still going thru with Gabriella...she was not physically abused as in hit, but she was sexually molested/abused by some older children in the neighborhood who took advantage of her knowing she is severe with ADHD and ODD and it has been a total devestation to our family BUT your so correct with this post "Angel's (Children) Don't Cry" as she has not yet shed one tear! She is such a little trooper and angel! I am so glad to see you still posting your lovely poetry like this!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
feel like crying, my membership ran out! hope someone will sponsor me! (already let the eteam know of my planning to rejoin within the month for the silver membership!)
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Dear Linda, I just read your comment on another poem, and my heart weeps for you. You are such a wonderful poet. Your specialty is writing about others in pain. You don't say much about your pain, but I know it is there and the struggle you are going through to live and love and find happiness. I always knew that, but you turned me away. In this poem I weap for the child and I weep for the child in you. Life does not have to be bitter. You can't escape forever inside yourself. Write about your pain Linda! Let others come to you with loving and caring comments, and this will change it.Hugs your friend Bill
Linda, as are all of yours, this is a great write! You have a way of putting a lump in the throat and a tear in the eye of the reader. Never stop writing my friend.
Jack
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Angels DO cry Linda. Even they feel pain, especially when it comes from us humans. Heartfelt write
Read this before, Linda, but it's definitely worth a repost. Powerfully, powerfully sad. And makes one truly hope for a better place someday.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Salutations Mother-Angel-Author-Poet Linda M. Hill.
Greetings.
Maybe Angel’s Don’t Cry, but I am as I try to type this through welled eyes. If there ever were an Angel walking amongst us, it must be You Poet!!! This subject can only be properly handled and addressed adequately by Your quill!!! I am absolutely beside myself… Thank You for speaking on behalf of the children!!! Please write that book!!!
Linda, this heartwrenching and boldly exposed story is brillantly and intensly told. Secrets of black and blue continue to dance a dark, dirty dance in the corners and closets of our wolrd. Only Jesus can set this straight and take away the pain. Linda, I believe angels do cry . . . they are us, our children, our women, our men . . . gravely mistreated . . . abused . . .
another excellent write my friend, on the ill affect of child abuse. If this child were to survive, and without the grace of God...what kind of chance will this child have? Will the scars make them strong or will it tear them asunder? Excellent piece.
Allen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
But they sure are in for a battle, don't hide, stand up, stand strong, march on, nothing can defeat you except being prisoner of ones own mind...
What would you do if your friend copped off with the man you loved? Wouldn't it break your heart? Abbie is heartbroken when Richard prefers her lovely French pen friend Colette over her.
Riveting poem! The daughter or son is abused
and wants to go to heaven with Jesus. WOW!
This,I understand! You are a DAMN GOOD POET!
(Poetess) BRAVA! (The correct terminology)
Love,
Becca
ty, Dani
Cynthia Castle
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
very powerful write here
Tommy
COMPASSION Is You Linda Only You Could Write This Poem!
Your Friend, TRASK
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
feel like crying, my membership ran out! hope someone will sponsor me! (already let the eteam know of my planning to rejoin within the month for the silver membership!)
Precious...... Yet so painful
Your an Angel poet!
God Bless
Michelle~
Love Tinka
Jack
Greetings.
Maybe Angel’s Don’t Cry, but I am as I try to type this through welled eyes. If there ever were an Angel walking amongst us, it must be You Poet!!! This subject can only be properly handled and addressed adequately by Your quill!!! I am absolutely beside myself… Thank You for speaking on behalf of the children!!! Please write that book!!!
My Deepest Gratitude, Respect and Admiration.
Thomas Lanechanger
keep telling the story,
Marion
Allen