Why Daddy.... (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

this is what I have suffered through it is so hard to read a poem like this when you have gone through womething like it. you did a great job though!!

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on August 11, 2002

So touching, I hope it reaches everyone's heart.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

this is close to a lot of situations...you have expressed the feeling very well

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

sad... excellent poem describing the fellings of a child experiencing divorce...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

You do these necessary writes so well sad and haunting reminders.

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Hi Linda,
what a touching sad poem. You hit it right on the head, many kids think it's their fault.
The poor babies are so confused. A terrible subject but a profound write. Some things need to be said.
Well done. Gregg

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

very powerful
leave it up to you to say what has to be said in such a lovely way

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

So true and so very heartbreaking...
A very powerfully moving write...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

This is so very true,,,I have 3 grandchildren going through this now,,a terrible existence they have,,it hurts so bad,,to see these poor babies living through this misery,,Thanks Linda, a very good write,,Lisa

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

So sad and profound message.

Reviewed by Carl Setters (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Linda;
Sweetie, this is heart breaking to read but, sometimes we must these facts in life. I really enjoyed your poem about Daddy. Keep your poems coming you have a future in writing.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Great linda ... i loved this write ... This really speaks how the childrens are lost ... how they lose the care from both mother and father ... Most childrens in this world dont get the love and care from both of then ... Some get mothers love and someother will have to comprise with their father's love .. why is this so ... why is divorce roaming in most of the family as a devil to eat childrens happiness and dreams ... Wish all childrens get the love and affection from the parents who gave them this life ...

This is really a beautiful wirte ... Keep it up ... Keep smiling and always keep be happy ...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

courageous write! divorce is bad for anyone who experiences it, but it is always hardest on the dear, sweet little ones. absolutely loved this poem, and the picture goes along with it perfectly!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Bobby Harris (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Linda, This is excellent.
We have a family member going through this right now.
And, yes, it is the children that don't understand and think that that are to blame.
Thank you for writing and sharing this.

God Bless,
Bobby

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Yes, Linda. So much meaning here. You are so good at expressing what goes on inside of others, and even inside of me. I wish I had your talent. Then I would know you. Bill Hugs

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Courageous!! Heart-breaking!! Never goes away, does it, Linda? Never will. But because you are brave enough to write about it, someone will be helped. Brava!!!!

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

This is so true. I recently wrote an artical on divirced families. but I believe you handle this much better than I did. Love it.
Drkman