So hard to lose the ones we love. In the past two years I've lost 4 people close to me. I can share and identify with the pain in this poem. In the end we rely on our faith to sustain us and we keep the memories alive, for as long as we walk this earth. Absolutely beautiful.
Be well and be safe, always
Mark D. Chevalier
Awful heart wrenching. this is a beautiful plea full of understanding and questioning at the same time. The words carried me through this nightmare to the final serene-like ending. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Another beautiful and powerful poem. You really do have a gift and a way with words Linda.
This especially tugs at my heart. Thank you for the words. The comfort. And I don't want to flood your message/review board so just know that I am loving your work today! Peace
Agnes
Checking out children's poetry; so beautiful...God welcomed her dearly and His Love is more than we can comprehend.Thank You
Reviewed by Claire
Reviewed on February 25, 2003
That's a beautiful poem. Beautifully writen. I know many people who have lost children. If God cannot heal their hearts this poem will. God bless.
Reviewed by Becky Boyer
Reviewed on October 4, 2002
This a very beautiful write. Thank you for all that you have done for my son Zack. You will always be in my heart forever. I wish I could meet you. I want you to know that although we have never met I love you. You are such a wonderful woman. This poem you know has touched me in a way I hope no one would ever have to go through. You have read my heart.
absolutely beautiful...so moving and so lovingly written.
Reviewed by Jim Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
I like the rhyme, the heartfelt consideration of the poem. People can relate to this, whether they've experienced it or not. It is a skill to take something very personal and convert it into something everyone can relate to.
Reviewed by Sanilnath
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
Wonderful write .. Keep it up ..
U are a mother ...
U understand the truth ..
U gave the poem life ...
U did a right Job ...
and now this poem is in others Heart ...
beautiful tribute to your little girl!! so sorry you lost her; she is with jesus, and he is watching out over her and over you. may you be comforted, and know that many people care for you and love you!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((MANY HUGS))) thank you for reviewing my poem about my two "kids", johnny and ronee'!
Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
Tender, beautiful heartfelt write.
Reviewed by Smoke Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
Beautifully done. What emotion and yet strength you show in this work, God bless.
I think it is beautiful.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
take comfort in the fact she's in a better place, shes safe now, well looked after, and no doubt wanting you and yours to look after yourselves...heaven is the last stop, you'll see her someday... she was called...it dont make it easier your grief, nothing said nor done ever will, take comfort in her memory and the times you shared, they themselves are what it makes it all worthwhile...take care Linda...believe me she's happy and well looked after in heaven...Mark xx
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Be well and be safe, always
Mark D. Chevalier
Agnes
U are a mother ...
U understand the truth ..
U gave the poem life ...
U did a right Job ...
and now this poem is in others Heart ...
Good Write ...
Keep it up ... Keep smiling ...
Sometimes they are taken. With this tribute, you heal your grief.
Ron
I think it is beautiful.
Amor