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Let Them Love Me!
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
  
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I guess I shouldn't be so anxious standing
here alone-
Today I get my new Mom and Dad - today
I'm going home!
God , please let them love me - I will
try so hard to be good.
I've never had a Mom and Dad to love me
as they should.
God, please don't let them hit me like
my other mom used to do-
Or let me go hungry - or cry all
night through -
God , please let them love me - I'm so
scared and alone.
My little heart has never known the
love I thought was gone.
I never want to go back to the other
life I had-
Mom, she drinked alot and Daddy-
he was bad.
Both of them would hit me alot - Dad
would touch me too-
He would reach and grab me -
do things he shouldn't do!
God, please let them love me- my
new Mom and Dad-
Give me the love in my life that
I've never had.
I've been here for awhile - watched
other kids come and go-
Wondering who would want ME-
I'm not much , I know!
Finally the day has come - I'm
waiting by the door-
Oh PLEASE God, let them love me-
I've never had that before.
I'll do anything they ask- I want
to be their little girl-
I've always lived in a cold and
uncaring world.
Oh God , there's a car coming -
I'm so scared, you see-
My heart is beating, Oh so fast -
Please let them love me.......

God, please let them love me.
I will try hard to be good.
I've never had a Mom and Dad to
love me as they should........

© Linda Hill 2002
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 Reviews of "Let Them Love Me!"
Reviewed by Keighley Perkins (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2002
an amazing poem, voices the thoughts of children perfectly.

your friend,
Keighley.

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2002
Linda,
This is an inspired write. So full of the sad truths that so many refuse to face. Nice Job.
Drkman

Reviewed on October 7, 2002
this one touched me. as all of your writes do!! beautiful, heartwrenching write!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
What a beautiful heartfelt write. Sad how life can be. Thanks, Dani.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
Really pulls at the heartstrings as so much of your fine work does.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
A most lovely write, pity folk need reminding.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
"May heaven's blessings on your pathway shine." - Voltaire

Reviewed by A. Hack (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
Nice read, Linda. It reflects certain truths about our society today and how it affects our children. I like it.

Krisette


Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
Linda,

beautiful hit the home strings..
Hugs Peggy

Reviewed by J Coffey (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
that one hit too close to home, darlin'. that is very well done and you got me. EXCELLENT write.

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
What an indescribable experience being an
orphan has to be. Excellent voice for them.
Vicky

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
Gob Bless the children of the world and God Bless you for caring sooo much for them.
Great Write.

The Voice


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