Inner Self (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Linda--I loved the way you described how we, as a people, tend to hide our deepest secrets behind firewalls. It's so amazing how we tend to do this and there's usually only one key, or person, to ever open the firewalls to get inside. Imagine that? Great piece that was well written. You deserve my award. To bad you're not on Firesidepoetry. You would receive one. Thanks for sharing. Jim

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Dark yet inspiring...
Well written...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

beautiful, soft, gentle and wonderful write

William

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Dearest, your inner self is like a beautiful flower that will blossom as the tiny tears that fall inside your heart make it glow and shine with happiness. You are sweet, wonderful, and giving. I was the cruel one. I am so sorry for my jealousy. I drove you away. You are my adored Angel. My sweet life, my precious baby, and the light inside my heart. I love you. Bill

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

I was not talking of any one. You frinds in AD are all good and kind. I was talking about those friends who i lived with who i care with my heart. who i respected with my heart. When i used to give them everything .. they always used to show their back. Ha ha ha ... What a life this is ? Sometimes my approach towards love , friendship , care , affection , trueness and every thoughts was wrong ...

Sorry for my comments. Forgive me if i did anything wrong. It was just my experience in life made me write this great thought.

For me Friendship and all means a lot.....

Regards
Sanilnath

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Dear Linda, A very lovely poem, by a lovely person. I do not think you are selfish, if you were would you be able to collaberate with Chad so well. People even authors suffer from jealousy. I hate when someone is critical of your fine writing!!

ty
tony

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

3-22-03

As All Thing's Go To The(Inner) Self(God), Should He Let Me Do It Now__

I,TRASK Would(Will) Turn (Make Change)The World Upside Down To a T__

T(o),Its Inner Self As It Implodes

__In Your(There) Face...

I,TRASK Become a **Time Bandit . Will Of (God)!

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Great write Linda, we all have those hidden places for ourselves.

Nancy

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

I may be alot of things Sanil..
God don't make us perfect...
But selfish isn't one of them.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Very bitterly sweet.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Inner self is the very core of us. It directs our thinking and behaviour everyday. Some are stronger than our outer selves and we bring them out to the surface, but some are weaker and we kept them hidden inside us until it's time to bring them out.

Some inner selves are good; but some are bad. It depends how we control these inner selves.

Good thought-provoking piece, Linda!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Nice...just nice.
~E

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

Wonderful Repost....
Inner Self... I feel to smile at the Inner Self of people walking around. How stupid the Inner Self is? As the Innner Self Just keeps people selfish. When i was reading the Repost. I was Just thinking of the friends i had and how they behaved to me. Was thinking about each and everyone who i met in life. What i understood from my part of the program in ... "Inner self is always selfish". Its a truth. Its the reality.
Regards

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

awwww...just lovely. :)