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Broken Wing
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Life is but a vapor
That we cannot see
Darkness and pain
Overwhelm me
I try not to feel
I try not to cry
I'm like a sparrow with a broken wing
Whos forgotten how
To fly...

I wish I were a statue
With stone for a heart
Eyes that shed no tears
No pain can start
I wish I was in a world
Where dreams never die
I'm like a sparrow with a broken wing
Whos forgotten how
To fly...

© Linda Hill 2003

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 Reviews of "Broken Wing"
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
sad, but lovely write! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Hey Linda....this is one of ure best write...superbly done with loads of messages...love n luck my friend...enjoyed this much...bhuwan

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Linda, many things are much stronger after they have mended than before they were broken. I think you will be one of them! Wonderfully written expression of the pain and frustration of being human and hurtable.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Hi Linda, I see noreason your wing cannot be repaired. Think back two years when you could fly upwards.


lyf
tony

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
this is a wonderful flowing poem, and wings do heal..

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
excellent! but you are in a world where dreams never die... the ulitmate quest is to fly without wings...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
So sad but excellent in truth.
peg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
I hope your wing heals..
Enjoyable write......

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
this was a beautifully sad and tearfully bitter poem but you fly so well with such a caring and loving heart you aaare a true angel to all you meet

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Linda, love your poem. It soars.

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Sad but nicely done Linda.

Nancy

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
{{{{{{{{{{{{ Linda }}}}}}}}}}}

Wonderfully expressed..

Reviewed by Bill Murray
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Linda Mae, one day you will fly so high that your heart will sing. Happiness is close. Dry your eyes and live up to your promise. So many have counted on you for solace. Do not let them down. Your life is due to change. Let it be for the better, not the worse. Bill


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