Tribute to God (the Father.) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

beautiful one Kay!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2004

Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Stunning, Kay! How wonderful to have someone to pick us up whenever we fall! Thanks so much for sharing.

Peace.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Wonderful, isn't it Kay, to recognize the Father in the many ways we are all blessed.

peace,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Kay this is an exceptionally well-written honest tribute, and I am sure HE appreciates your openly displayed devotion and unwavering faith. May HIS peace always be with you and yours, Poet.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Dear Kay,

Truly inspirational,
beaurifully written.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

beautifully inspired poetry!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Emotional But Compassionate Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Kay -

Brillant write ... Bravo!

Robert

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

OOOh how did I miss this gem, what a loving and truthful account of how our Heavenly Father is. No doubt about HIM, he is always with us, it is just us, who put him in the closet when we think we can do it our way, foolhardy creations of HIS :)
Lovely Lovely lovely and Praises to HIM for inspiring you to write this for us to benefit from too.
TY Kay, HE Loves you and all of us, in that we can rest, and be comforted.

Love n hugs
Ch'erie
IN HIM.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

This would make a beautiful song...absolutely.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Beautiful inspiration.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Very moving and inspirational write.

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

As of lately, I haven't been doing much commenting on anyones poetry, but I love this one and I hope you don't mind me making a copy. It's one that makes a person feel good when they're going through hard times. Thank you for sharing this gem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Great write Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Great affirmation and witness. Trust me, it'll go a long ways. Keep your eyes on Him.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Dear Kay,
this is absolutely excellent. We should never forget that He is always close to us to help us out of all misery. Some people do and exclude Him from their lifes. I feel sorry for them.
I love this one. It's a keeper.
Love

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Inspiring write for our God...
Love your new pic on your bio
Smooocheeewoman you...........
Lurve ya!
x0x0x0xx0

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Kay..You have the nail on the head...
God our Father , is our real father..and he alone is worthy of our praise and trust .

Bountiful composition

Peter Paton

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Kay this is a beautiful tribute to Creator God! Inspired work that uplifts the reader! Kudo's!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

So beautiful and inspiring, Kay.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Kay, while my beliefs don't run in this direction, per se, you have quite well given a non-believer hope & explained HIS infinite wisdom and quite frankly, your own...! Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Wonderful and loving tribute, Kay!