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Looking into tear-pools.
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I saw 'US' there, my dear,
in the teardrops
on the floor,
no more tangible
as once we were before,
dissipating slowly there,
faded by your love-affair,
wearied out from sobbing cry,
stared I through wet reddened eye
into an ebb where love need die
and 'WE' must cease-to BE.

Footnote:

Old work,don't worry,I'm happy.

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Reviews of "Looking into tear-pools."

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Good to read you again and thanks for thr foot note!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Glad it's an 'Old write' and you're happy!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

It is wonderful "old" work expressio I love how it shaped a tear deop too. Also"Glad your happy"

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Glad you are happy and this is an old work...be well, Ed

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Sad, short and powerful, Kay!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

May be an old work but still has the impact of a punch to the heart. You captured the hurt and pain of what being cheated on feels like.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Well done...sad to see relationships fizzle and people unhappy. It should be the one place we shine.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Wow! glad for the footnote;-) This is superb poetry Kay!
Always a pleasure to read you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Happy to read your words Kay...
Lurve with more love..
Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Infidelity a sure marriage killer and rightly so. The betrayal of a spouse causes deep wounds that very few marriages can withstand.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Very emotional, well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

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