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Miniscule Shreads. (revised poem)
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Miniscule shreads. by Kay P Devenish Yesterday's just shrapnel now sticking through my heart, it didn't take an atom bomb to blow my soul apart, just the sight of you that night held in her embrace, pure dynamite, set alight, exploding in my face. Bits of me are everywhere but none of them you'll find, the human eye can't see a lie... or touch a blown up mind. The enemy I couldn't see, (that helped you to succeed), there is no cross to mark my grave, no eulogy to read. Some folks think they see me still... but ,it's MY ghost they see, for in life's battlefield, concealed, shreads miniscule there's......................... " me." ( p.s. To all the darlings who commented on my daughter's birthday poem,(my last post)thank you so much she was so excited to see it ,she just loved it...and it is definately going into our photo album with our other treasures.A BIG Hug from Alexandra and me to you.) AND LOTS OF KISSES TOO.

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Kay,

Wonderful revision - deeply sad; emotive write ... beautiful!!

Blessings;

Robert

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Outstanding poem. VERY well wriiten!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Kay, this write is excellent, although somewhat sad.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Hi Kay,
Such a sad painful write..
Though written so beautiful

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Very well written kay!!

hugs to Alexandra!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

A fantastic poem Kay...you really have a unique style and I love all you do.
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

wonderful rewrite!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Kay A gem that I'm so glad to see revised!You are a gem too;-)!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Well written!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Sader than sad poem..
Great comparison to the broken heart
SMooooooooooooooooo0000000000000CHYA!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

This one cuts deeply. Fantastic write!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Excellent!!!!
The best thing I have read today!!!
I am in awe!
well done!!!
pax
A

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

What a super expression you have here!
Captured so well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Kay, this is a super write. The flow and rhyme were excellent. Not one glitch anywhere. Read like a charm.

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