Togetherness (poem) by Mark M Lichterman on AuthorsDen

Togetherness
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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Togetherness... On this day, "togetherness" taking a different turn as... On this day, my lady love... Okay, admittedly most guys will look upon this as, oh, maybe feminine, or, most likely, being male this a thing they would never do, never consider doing. However, once every six weeks or so... Yeah, a cute Asian girl... for a half hour in relaxed mode as a cute Asian girl does me... On this day, “Togetherness” taking a different turn, a cute Asian guy doing her, a cute Asian girl doing me... Finished, after the cute Asian girl did me after the cute Asian guy did her... feeling now as on a cloud, feeling now as strolling upon silk. Togetherness taking a different turn, on this day... pedicures’ for we for my lady and me. Oh, and no... I don't get 'em polished.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2010

Delightful!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on October 2, 2010

Sneaky, sneaky Mr Markie. Funny too! I prefer to bite my nails, always get the exact cut I'm looking for. Patrick

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on September 29, 2010

Sounds like a bit of fun...together, yet briefly apart. Polish wouldn't suit you lol ~ Your friend, Lizzie

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on September 28, 2010

sooooo cute. loved this. - Morgan

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on September 26, 2010

Smiles, I too had to read this slowly Nicely done Markie

your friend
Kat

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on September 25, 2010

every inch of our bodies are important
but I myself will like an American woman
for my massage & foot grooming
their hands are better for everything...

No More Toe Jam
Vickie

Reviewed by pat medlin

Hah! had to read this one twice before connecting the 'doin' me'pedicure' part...that'll teach me to read a bit slower won't it?
hmmmmmm

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Absolutely delightful poem Mark, and aren't pedicures relaxing...good for you!

Carole~

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Giggle........you have a delightful way with words,my friend! Sounds like you take time to pamper yourselves!!! Good for you!!!

Your friend,
Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on September 24, 2010

This poem is so clever!
And OMG I am so JEALOUS!!! A pedicure sounds like rich silk ~ I was just looking at my feet thinking hmm, I wonder what those things feel like!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Hmnnn sounds like you have found a good way to relax...who cares what others say.
fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Those are fulfilling words, I believe Fred and I will have our turns. Great write Markie.

Your #1 Newfie Friend, Hugs XOXOXO, Rose