Women Go Away!! (poem) by Mark M Lichterman on AuthorsDen

Women Go Away!!
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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Originally presented on 9/17/10
Women, Go Away!!! For us becoming older. Specifically for us men that are becoming older. More specifically for us men that are older. Women, or those easily offended, delicate subject here! So if easily offended, simply put, Go away! Always one to appreciate girls and, when no longer a boy, to this day always one to appreciate women, always one to desire women, I had thought with older age my appreciation, my desire would diminish but, alas, though doing all not to be obvious, my head still turns and my eyes still follow causing this older... causing this old man to believe, to truly believe that this old man will always, will always, until coins are placed upon my no longer seeing eyes, this old man will always appreciate, will always desire, even though... Alas, though "things" no longer work as once they had... Which brings me to the delicate subject here. The delicate subject most women will never know unless informed by one of the opposite sex, most women will never know how men, how most old men miss... Call it what you will, guys: A woody! A hard-on! A boner! An erection! Women will never know how old men, how most of us old men miss awakening in the morning without: A woody! A hard-on! A Boner! An erection! Sorry, delicate subject here. But for you old guys, for some of you old guys, I just wanted you to know... you ain't alone!

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on April 13, 2011

You knew I had to read this poem!!! You men are not alone, us women arent as agile as we once where either.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 21, 2011

As always pole-ite with the audience giving fair warning. At least you won't smoosh it under the toilet seat. Patrick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Of course you knew the title of this one was going to draw me in...giggle! This write is both frank and earnest, Mark....I'm quite certain you've voiced a lot of "mature" males thoughts. I don't look at men as becoming older anymore....I see them as "much" more interesting! And as a woman I can tell you passion may fade..but desire is eternal!

Your friend,
Anna

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

Reviewed on March 20, 2011

Delicate subject indeed, but the 'older' male should keep in mind that the 'older' female also misses these very same, shall we say, EVENTS. :)

Donna

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on March 19, 2011

Things no longer work.. try marmite. i think this is a great write.
Smack' right between the eyes stuff. good pen

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Truly a Poem from the heart and soul within and I agree yes delicate However, Mark with older age comes wisdom, and a boy that finally turns into a Gentleman. Your friend Laura

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Yes, a delicate subject indeed ;-)
But the point is in the heart...
Blessings,
Christine