Red-eyed Jupiter
weeps as I pass
the rings of Uranus
and Saturn
In distant void
crystaline winds are
frozen as my hard
lost heart.
Air clings to rock
as I cling to ancient dreams--
Ah! Proud Sun
dimmed by distance,
chastened by the bitter cold,
Here lies a place of splendor
at the end of your
tethering chain--
the black ice towers
of Ellycene--
City of wonder...forever...dead.
I am a falling star
that never fell,
renegade,
rogue,
a splinter of time
flying into the pitiless
face of Universe
once again.
The thaw is past--
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Reviewed by Jaka
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
I loved this poetry it's cool
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2002
I just loved the way this sounds
not to mention the visions it gave me
Outstanding write Lee
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not to mention the visions it gave me
Outstanding write Lee