Sudden morning storm a-brewing
beholds expenctant dew from dewing;
swirling leaves upon the walk,
cutting short chance strangers' talk
with roaring wind and pelting rain--
their romantic meeting to refrain.
Park bench but fateful footfalls away
beckons love's laughter another day.
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Reviews of "My Crisp Morning Storm - Eileen's Challenge"
oh this is beautiful
and i Love how you ended it withi the park bench
its so true
I have a book about chairs in france, outside park chais, just b and white photos of them, and underneath each picture is a caption.......and its hysterical! I will not part with the book. Its like chairs had minds....and were observing us from all ends lol
this poem is lovely, has perfect meter, and is so vivid, very authentic, and a total pleasure to read :)
pax A
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Terrific rhythm!! :)
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
What a picture comes to mind! This is very visual thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece.
You have captured this "stormy" moment, expressed it most eloquently in verse and have fulfilled the challenge. Well done, Vicky. Love and peace to you. Regis
I know Eileen will be pleased that you've taken her challenge and met it with such delightful verse.
It was filled with exciting imagery, and one can almost see the meeting being left in a hurry.
Great work.
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and i Love how you ended it withi the park bench
its so true
I have a book about chairs in france, outside park chais, just b and white photos of them, and underneath each picture is a caption.......and its hysterical! I will not part with the book. Its like chairs had minds....and were observing us from all ends lol
this poem is lovely, has perfect meter, and is so vivid, very authentic, and a total pleasure to read :)
pax A
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
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It was filled with exciting imagery, and one can almost see the meeting being left in a hurry.
Great work.
Lisa