About my brother, he's a drug addict and alcoholic. My best work on the site I think. revised.
Shove it all in the garbage can,
Jam it all into the trash.
That is my heinous plan,
To cast our memories into an obscure ash.
My eyes are constantly following in your path,
But I've chosen to turn a different way.
I would never step into that hellish wrath
Only to be hurt by Satan’s aftermath.
Scorched by your abundance of deceit and lies,
I finally have the intelligence to realize,
That you represent everything I despise.
Why do you hurt your loved ones so much?
Do you think they’ll put up with it any longer?
Well I’m afraid you’ve lost your touch,
We’ve all become far stronger.
We turn our heads in disgust towards you,
Is that what you wanted to achieve?
Your pity from us has run overdue
There’s nothing more we’ll believe,
You may as well just leave.
You've ruined our family,
You've torn us apart,
You've left your father with a broken heart.
I depart with you on one last note,
Because you chose to devote
Everything you had to this,
You don’t even get a goodbye kiss.
onfortunately, this is not very uncommon... be strong, it never gets easier...
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Excellant work here Kaci WOW! Good luck sincerely to you and your family!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Sarah Mathews (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
wow kaci. this is really good, the words just flow so perfect, I agree with u in that this is one of your best pieces. keep up the good work! luvs----*sarah*
excellent piece, kaci; best of luck to you and your family; y'all are in my thoughts and prayers. ((((HUGS)))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Tough love can only go so far.
Nice piece, Kaci.
-James
Wow!! This says EXACTLY what's happening with my brother right now..and how we feel. It was so well written. I recently posted one called "A Thin Line Between Love And Hate"
Thanks for sharing this..
Good luck to you and your family.
Jenni
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~Michelle~
~Nikki~
Nice piece, Kaci.
-James
Thanks for sharing this..
Good luck to you and your family.
Jenni