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She's Not a Girl . . .
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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Her 'innocence' was measured out in minutes . . .


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She's not a girl who missed too much

pain in life; was well acquainted with

a thing called discomfort - it followed

her through life like a derailed train.

She lied with deceitful eyes, while her

hands appeared to be busy stabbing

friends in the back; she had a bar of

soap with the image of Mother Mary.

Showered with it daily in hopes of

washing away all her sins; but they

were too far ingrained - her purity

was anything but childlike.

Her 'innocence' was measured out

in minutes, her fear in seconds

For protection, liked to carry a

Jack Knife in her sweaty hands.

Big woman walking in the park

now - Jack Knife of all trades

What was about to happen to

her, she didn't have a clue.

A masher came along and Jacked

her up - now she found herself lying

in the dark, bleeding to death; was

buried the next day - unmarked grave.

No one came to visit, only her deceased

mom; "If you're lonely, you can talk to me;"

But it was too late - her soul had already

gone to Hell; all came about from neglect.

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "She's Not a Girl . . ."
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
This one...brings sorrow deep as there are many out there like her (him)
You have written this from a compassionate heart! Added to my library along with many other great reads.
You have the ability to give the reader a clear picture with your words. Her innocence was measured out in minutes-could not have been better written in any way.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 13, 2008
A very sad offering Lance!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
Neglect - such a sad thing for any living being; and such a sad piece.

Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Hello Lance,

Graphic. Almost witnessed the "manslaughter" in my mind. Destruction of the inner self is the most cruel of all because the person can only regain life through the love of God...the Great Healer, no human being can cure it.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Lance,
Wow! A powerful truth in this write. One of your best, my friend. A keeper. This could be anyone..you or me. Thought provoking!

Blessings an huggs,
~Linda

Reviewed on December 11, 2008
This one powerfully, sadly penned ... well done, Lance.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Ouch...souch a captivating sad story... well done Lance.
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Powerful and heartbreaking a tale you spin.
Another life cut so short,
perhaps another life should not have been......

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Stark and sadly real, Lance. One can only feel deep sorrow when thinking about how many "lost souls" there are all about us. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Sad write; well done, Lance!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Poor soul. To not know love and never find it is horrible. Too many people pass this way. She only gave what she had been taught in her life. Too bad and sad. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
This poem is captivating.I sure hope I don't meet someone like that in the near future lol.I enjoy this poem.Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Well, she was definately someone who found no love in life and it doesn't look like she's going to find it in the after life either. I hope you don't know anyone like this my friend. I hope she was invented in that amazing brain of yours. WEll done poet, well done indeed. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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