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One Eyed Blind
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'Everything he looked at lacked any form'


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He was one eyed blind

Couldn't see out the other

Lacked any visual perception

Everything he looked at

lacked any form - his friends;

his marriage; even himself

Did not like what he saw in

the mirror . . . took to walking

around with a seeing eye dog.

Kept getting bit - Rex didn't

know you shouldn't bite the

hand that feeds you; did it

anyway - wasn't as blind as

his master; tried to change

him but soon realized you

cannot teach an old fool new

tricks . . . packed his favorite

toy and bedding - hit the bricks.

Adding insult to injury, both his

friends and wife disowned him;

She told him to take their vows

and shove them; his friends

flipped him the finger - told him

to get lost; the whole sad thing

boiled down to one thing; he

couldn't see . . . for you see, all

he needed were glasses (got 'ya)!

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "One Eyed Blind"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Walking life and seeing nothing. It is a choice and many take the blinded path. Love this one!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 20, 2008
Sorry...but I could not resist "our" collaboration to light up this piece even more :)with much love to go with it!!

~One Eye Blind~

Low creeping thoughts

Inflames my lust; others' goods my envy

Misery is my pity; no one else's intoxicating wealth

Distilled so finely that it can filter through anything

For it does not need blind innuendoes nor broken truths

It can exist free and wild, running from a teary eye to a blind-teary eye

Sometimes it just wants parts of my detached body

Half-libel for repeated errors - thwarting another assassination attempt on myself

One eye blind decisiveness of a person ready to sacrifice their life for a half-obscure cause

The one eye blind conviction - I must do something about other people's inexcusable behavior

And that I may have to do it whether they like it or not

Derives from the assumption that the world is quickly turning to dust

One eye blind to the suffering liberated by decay

Willfully disobeying with feet of clay enthusiasm

Yielding hardness is their very core

Suddenly it seems that all have become one eye blind

Somehow now lost in the consciousness of a mortal danger

How vigilant they are in darkness with one eye blind to light

Forever sacrificing a present to a future good

As only as the one eye blind do of colors

Irrational one eye blind faith, they want to go backwards instead of forward

Believing they're always seen as the best, and scorn a guide for their empire

For there they'll reign, always one eye blind to things deeper than skin deep

One eye blind is the process of leading me gently back to myself - what is essential is invisible to the eye.

Copyright © 2005 Tinka Boukes and Dennis O'Bell

Reviewed on December 19, 2008
Wow. This one packs a punch - eyes too blind to see, ears too deaf to hear ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
I can relate since I have had several eye operations and only use my right eye. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
you
cannot teach an old fool new
tricks . . .

I hope that ain't really true, since this old fool still trys to learn somethin, every day!

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
Epilog: His wife and his dog Rex left him, and boy did he miss him.

Q: Why do bad people happen to good dogs?

Rockie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
...you got me!..but in reality,,there is much truth in this poem..many do not see even with glasses,,,,,Well done Lance!
hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
This is very brillant.I enjoy it very much,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Lance,
Creative and clever, my friend.

Blessings and huggs,
~Linda

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Hello Robert,

Crafty and cunning, sleek ending though! Bet he got himself a new wife after getting new glasses! Great prolific write! Enjoyed it.

Cynthia

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
LIKE: What Fools You Mortals Be(Come)Are...

Thank You Your Kind Comments...

TRASK

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
LOL-I am left hanging...
stubborn ole goat he is...
sometimes hard things happen to make one see
"One Eyed Blind" Wow, very interesting poetic perception
dancing us around like that-clever Poet!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Holy Cow Lance, he was a pitiful character one eyed or not. If your dog left him before his wife, I don't know what to say to that for dogs are so loyal. Poor guy just needs eye doctor but I don't think he'll find one of those either...he'd only see a half witted doc. got ya...love and hugs, Bonnie


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