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Reincarnated
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'Arrived – checked into his reservation'


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He awoke one morning – felt kind of strange

Had a peculiar desire to take a vacation to

the Mohawk Valley in New York; Fort

Stanwix to be exact; packed and quickly left.

 

Arrived – checked into his reservation, grabbed

his digital camera and went to explore; a battle

had been fought back on August 6, 1777; the

same day he showed up; all was about to change.

 

Parked his car – as he began walking, everything

around him was particled slowly, but steadily, into

the past; he could feel over 230 years being pulled

over his face; couldn’t believe his very eyes.

 

He reluctantly turned around – his vehicle was gone

There, doing battle in the forest, were colonists,

Indians, and Red Coats; and when he looked down

he was in American Revolutionary regalia.

 

In less than a Minute [man] – he and what used to be

2008 had all been transported back in time; so shocked

he stumbled; lost his balance and slid down a fifty foot

ravine; right into Bloody Creek with long-rifle in hand.

 

Musket balls zinged by his ears as they exchanged sides

Bodies were dropping like swatted flies as they changed

the color of the creek from clear to red – then, as quickly as

it began, everyone and everything began to disintegrate.

 

He awoke in a nearby hospital – nobody believed his story

That is, all but the surgical team that removed several musket

balls and pieces of uniform from his body; had them analyzed

They dated back some 230 years; he had been reincarnated.

 

That night while resting in his hospital bed, soldiers from the

British militia came to his room, dragged him back to his grave

A nurse rushed in – screamed; there had been a struggle; all that

was left was a blood-stained Red Coat’s hat and his wrist band.

 

‘2009’ RLS

 

 


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 Reviews of "Reincarnated"
Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on February 10, 2009
Freaky, very unusual and imaginative, but time travel? Gee I don't know...Starman

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 7, 2009
Yep, good again. I have always loved the concept of time travel, the matrix and all that. Well written. Blessings, J'nia

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
Another tale from..."The Twilight Zone"
Keep them coming as they are wonderful !!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 22, 2009
In less than a Minute [man]

I love time travel tales, and this one is fabulous.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
very well written ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Oh fabulous, fabulous, fabulous and how I wish that could really happen because I would gladly make the trip again....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
My goodness I was totally drawn into this...excellent Lance!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Lance, this gave me chills blood and gore on such a scale as your words and pic show,great drama in this piece well done!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
... ooo... spooky!!! better check me ancestry and make sure i had no part in this! Unless i can claim to have been one of the nurses! :)) Great re-enactment on dual timescales. xx

Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Great scott, Lance, this is fanTAStic! BRAVO!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on January 21, 2009
YOu have the gift of the spirit walker, and the words to go with it.
A great spin, I was there myself for the moment.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Masterfully written Lance Dearest!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Lance,

WOW. All I can say is WOW. Would make one helluva movie (or episode of Twilight Zone). Excellently, compellingly penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
What Kimmy said about the movie is a great idea...and beyond that all I can say is WOW, what a neat story and idea...okay, I am now a regular reader and am going to start tracking you...I enjoy this type of stuff...Ed (oh & Rufuz)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Wow Wee! I could watch this movie! What a pen that frenzied my soul, imagining myself in such...
What a ride!

Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Holy Cow what a write...so believable and pen...What a Brilliant write my dear friend Lance, for I believed it all. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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