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Whispers From Your Heart
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
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Whispers From Your Heart




I lay my head in your lap,
Listening to you sing,
The music of your voice,
flows into my ears,
And into my heart,
beating with the joy,
As it listens,
to the whispers of love,

I curl my fingers in your hair,
stroking you softly,
living this life of love,
without a care in the world,
now that you are here,
we are living our dream...

With my heart wide open,
I hold your hand in mine,
feeling the tenderness of your fingertips,
I catch your fingers,
and move them over my lips,
kissing each finger as it passes,
one after another until I am done,
And begin anew...

I feel the love flow,
from your fingertips into my heart,
and I can't stop myself from leaning forward,
and kissing you,
whisper in your lovely ear,
"I love you so much..."

The whisper from your heart,
makes me feel precious,
But still I ask myself,
"Do I deserve the heart you offer me?"

I see the pain in your eyes,
as your heart speaks to mine,
so I answer as only I can,
"Ah love,
If you can melt the ice in my heart,
and ease the dark with the light of your life,
you deserve all I have to give you,
And so much more..."

I get up slowly,
and look into your eyes,
wishing you deeply in my heart,
I move toward your lips,
Asking you softly,
"Shall I kiss you?"

"Yes my love,
Kiss me,
and make me feel the love,
that burns with such passion in your heart,
Kiss me now,
and make me forget the past,
Help me to remember,
who I use to be..."

I hug you against me,
closing my eyes,
If this is a dream,
then I do not want to awaken!
My eyes keep shedding,
droplets of love,
My heart is singing the Song of Love!
Shouting to the world,
"You are my Life!"

I kiss your tears,
and wipe them away,
whisper softly,
"Baby, don't cry today-
This is a magic time,
for you and I,
the world does not exist,
In this lovely place,
We live here safely,
As lovers,
In a beautiful Garden of Love..."

"I see your lips,
wet and moist with my tears,
I am shivering,
But not from the cold wind,
blowing in our garden,
I wish to bite those lips,
like an red apple,
so fresh and inviting,
My love,
I want to swallow you whole..."

"Bite me then,
Swallow me whole,
Make me a part of your life forever,
The way I always wanted to know-
Let your heart whisper no more,
Let us shout it from the trees,
How much I love you,
and you love me..."

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 Reviews of "Whispers From Your Heart"
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
ooohhhhh! This is true poetry! Such deep feelings of love and passion! Made my lonely heart pound with excitement! A great collaboration! And the imagery is superb!

Denise

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Superb collaboration. Enjoyed reading this over and over

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
Wonderful love poem - yes, the paradise of love feels timeless like a timeless joutney on a blue lotus. Great expression of passion, of desire merged with true love. May it last long. Franz

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
Outstanding collaboration! ~Z~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
Just very beautifully done Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
What can I add that hasn't already been said? This is absolutely wonderful, sweetie! An opening of two hearts, the beginning of a deeper love ... exquisite!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
Great collaboration!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004
great love poem and a joy to read Retta, thanks, love and peace. G

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Brilliantly done, even with the canabalism:))

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
SO BEAUTIFUL SO BEAUTIFUL Excellent both of you..............

LadyPeg

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
wonderfully written collaboration ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Beautiful!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
tntalizing write Reindeer and Sanilnath, I liked what you had to say about the apple too, so nice the way these whispers flowed too, rally magnificient, ty al

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Beautiful collaboration, Rein and Sanil...this is so seamless and romantic...You two make a great team...

Debashish

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Wonderful work. You two are a great team.....

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
ha ha :) this was excellent ..
Never thought it will evolve so beautifully ...
Thanks a lot ...
Thankyou very much ...


once more thankyou

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
A most beautiful collaboration, Reindeer!
This is absolutely stunning, as is the art...
Superb poetry!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Romantic ,sensual, and lovely, wonderful collaboration, Reindeer and Sanil!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Lovely collaboration Reindeer and Sanil....
really some great lines here..
very passionate and romantic...floria

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Delightful.
Missed reading you and I have little time here.
Take care!

Reviewed on March 17, 2004
oh, reindeer, this is one beautiful write! this literally took my breath away! thanks for sharing; truly enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
So many people yearn for a relationship such as this
lovely poem describes...and the picture...Awesome!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
If you can melt the ice in my heart,
and ease the dark with the light of your life,
you deserve all I have to give you,
And so much more...

Truly wonderful words and sentiments, Reindeer.

Reviewed on March 17, 2004
(((reindeer and sanilith)))

wonderful collaborative effort! gently and beautifully expressed. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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