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Will You Remember Me…?
I wonder sometimes,
When the day ends,
And silence reigns,
Amid the falling stars,
And weeping moon,
If you will remember me,
In the blazing heat of noon,
When the flowers bloom,
And life is good,
Will you hear my name,
When someone calls to you?
When you look into her eyes,
The one you left me for,
Will you see the love,
I had inside?
I wonder sometimes,
Why I came,
Even more,
Why I stayed-
When I knew it was all,
For naught,
You say not a game,
But only the insane,
Could hold you so close,
And forget for a moment,
That you were merely a ghost-
A figment of my creation,
Someone to hold my hand,
And pretend to understand,
The darkness of my heart…
When we part,
As surely we will,
Will you remember me,
When the nights are still?
Will you look out your window,
Staring into the sky,
And when the moon winks,
Her lovely eye,
Will you see me,
Whisper good-bye?
I wonder sometimes,
If when you see the summer sky,
And the clouds flowing softly by,
In a sky so beautifully blue,
If you will remember,
How much I loved you-
And finally understand,
How much I wanted you,
To love me too…
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- Mocha
Gloria
I am glad you have given yourself permission to let go of your pain and this (the Female Portion) is like a declaration that you chose to be free of the pain residing in the past and not let it affect your future. All at the inspiration and challenge of others.
Take the love of all those who have viewed your work as vote of confidence you are a grand poet, and a lovely person.
Choose to have a powerful tommorrow,
mark
A great write!
Thanks for the review too!
Beautiful!
Love Tinka
TRASK
so many heartfelt lines here...just loved it..
floria
Carmen
and moving, oh yes and how so gently exploring what pains us, so much...
beautifully done, amen...
much here so many will see and know and feel with ...
(((retta)))
mich
and also, thanks always for your reviews Retta..
Jack
enjoyed much
William