Are you reading into my mind?
Excellent poem and describes many feelings I have felt for a person I met on Yahoo. He lives in India. I have known him several years.
Keep on expressing, you do it so well!
We will have to talk one day.
Becca
A wonderful expression of desire! I embrace you with adoration and peace....
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2004
this had such a nice friendly and cozy feel to it retta, the everyday stuff we all do long for, to participate in, you spelled it all out so wonderfully, beautifully, ty al
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2004
This is very powerful romantic poetry, Poet!!! Outstanding!!!…
Stunning visual - so sharply penetrating and an appropriate depiction of your words, which are also "blue" but highly observational and far-seeing. It's like the eyes are straining to see and capture anything of the beloved in the very stratasphere while they are yet apart. Intensely longing, and yet so humbly grateful too for what already has been. A true and devoted love portrayed here, that notices everything and loves especially the "small" things which may go unnoticed to a casual acquaintance. A very perceptive and captivating write, thank you. Kate xx
Oh...I love this one. So loving and true; the best part is the "watched you at your worst". Isn't that the best? To know someone when their beneath playing their part and still love them. Nicely done.
M.Rose
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2004
A very romantic beautiful write.
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2004
This was so nice and more and more truth live in this write ... Loved a lot lines which always live in most heart as the feeling of care and goodness for near ones ...
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
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Excellent poem and describes many feelings I have felt for a person I met on Yahoo. He lives in India. I have known him several years.
Keep on expressing, you do it so well!
We will have to talk one day.
Becca
Knows the feeling for sure here.
Tommy
TRASK
ohh I know you have the way to reach the other side....
enjoyed you here........
The yearning in this one is deeply felt!
A beautiful gem, Reindeer!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Debs
M.Rose
Thanks for sharing
"The softness of your voice,
Reaches deep inside of me,
I often wonder,
How the future would be"
Sounds like a wonderful dream. I love the longing created here.