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The Seasons of Our Love
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
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A Collaboration of John Black Feather and Reindeer



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Seasons of Our Love



In spring,
Our love buds,
Sweetness and light,
Making our lives a joy-
We are young now,
And everything is possible,
The future knows no boundaries,
And we feel that love will last forever…

By summer our passions burn brightly,
Raging fire that sears our souls,
I love you so much it hurts-
And you cannot bear to leave my side…

In fall the fire has dampened,
To a deep understanding that,
We shall be together for ever,
We move slower now,
And those passionate kisses are forgotten,
Instead there is comfort to be found,
In holding you close watching the moon rise…

Winter’s pale moon rises,
Yet our love has never dimmed,
We are closer now,
Then we have ever been,
Our hearts have remained young,
The weakness of the flesh has staked its claim,
And though age shows itself to others,
I am blind to its revelations,
Seeing only the lovely beauty,
I long ago claimed as my bride…

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 Reviews of "The Seasons of Our Love"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 3, 2005
sigh...i just love this

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Love is all. You express it wonderfully in this creation. Great collaborative offering. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
A wonderful description of love; thrilling, loving and warm! Love at its best! Great job!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
I think this is simply beautiful. Can't say it any other way. Great collab. It speaks to the part of us that longs for that lifetime companion. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Fantasically beautiful, and testament to the power of love and togetherness...True love will always transcend time...brilliant.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Why I Read You Your Stuff--Never Dull Romance....

TRASK

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
enjoyed very much
geart captivating write

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
A beautiful testament to a beautiful and enduring love that involves the full spectrum of passion's moods and seasons. This speaks of a deep unity that involves the mutual sharing and celebration of the whole persons, and where balance and harmony shape and nurture your co-exitance. Breathtaking, Retta, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Allthough this write touched me, I couldn't review it after the first reading. It made me cry and no words would come...

Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Reindeer,

A stunning, beautifully penned collaborative write--such emotion, honestly and perfectly expressed--thank you

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
What a captivating portrait of shared life and intimacy that spans time and weathers all pain. Emotionally moving and spiritually beautiful throughout.

Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Retta,

The quintessential collaboration ... brilliant!!


Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
A beautiful piece. Excellent!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Oh so beautiful, but I have come to expect nothing less from you. This meld is sheer perfection. Well done.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
This is the stuff dreams are made of, Reindeer. Your poem is breathtakingly beautiful. The collaboration is as seamless as the unified love of which it speaks. Wonderful work!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on March 29, 2005
You have described every season so beautifully. Wonderful write, Retta!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
This is so in line... and in tune... with the lives My Love and I have lived... and are living. Thank you. It is rare that younger persons think about such, much less write beautifully and accurately about it. Keep this one for regular reading... as the years wind down. And, do that extra fifty percent it takes to stay in love! - Bill


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Beautiful love collaboration in the sincerest words of two wonderful poets.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
What an absolutely beautiful duet!

You´ve captured the essence of Love.

Love, Light, Joy, Peace & Creativity,
Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Absolutely stunning!!

Love Tinka The Evil One ;(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Love the seasons allegory...
Hope it's a long hot hot hot summer..
Divine write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
a very beautiful and enchanting collaboration ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
beautiful collaboration

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
Absolutely splendid poetry. -- Jeff

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
Thank both of you for sharing this beautiful gem!
It is one to treasure!

Eileen

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
This is love.
Reminds me of my parents, Mom gone, Dad in a nursing home-but still wearing the ring, still knowing love.
My ring is gone already.
John


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