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Following Where You Lead...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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Choose not just any path,
My friend,
For, I can only follow you so far…
You’d be wise to tread slowly…
For I’ve often been called over wary-
My years in the world,
Have taught me not to trust…
That the world is full of liars
And men who do not mean what they say…

So when you come to me,
Holding out you hand,
Asking me to trust…
I cannot reach to you
With the faith of a child,
My hand has been slapped away
Too many times…

Nor gaze upon your face,
With the love and innocence
Of they first time lover…

You ask me to let you be my guide,
And I fear so much
Were you are taking me…

Where will you lead me-
My friend,
Where are we heading?

I anger you with my fear,
And you do not understand
My hesitation…
Yet,

Of all the things I learned,
I have learned not to walk down
Dark and lonely alleys…
I fear the monsters that lurk there,
Hiding behind the bushes and fences…

You promise to be with me,
Holding my hand,
Giving me strength through that link…
Yet I tremble still,

Wondering if I have the strength,
Not to let you down again,
For this I fear more than the monsters,
That lurk deep within my soul…




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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Sensational poem Retta

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
its so hard for people who have been abused or neglected to trust and follow others this poem captures that so much awesome job on it

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Excellent writing, as always

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
wow...this is so excellent...last stanza...superb....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Dear Retta, Excellent writing, as always. There is so much love in you, wanting to come out.


tony

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Beautiful Reindeer!
Jack

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Reindeer,
You have such a gift. This is another very beautiful piece.

Chrissie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Well done, as usual.
~E

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Outstanding write, Retta.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Oh Retta,
Yes the message of innocence wounded and betrayed and the imagery as only you do in the worlds you create foie us to travel by spirit.
I love your poetry...
Peg

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Well written, indeed--and like that last stanza, as well...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Retta This is a wonderful piece,
well penned

William

Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Exceptional writting...many of us know this feeling all to well. Superb.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Excellent write.. I know what this feeling well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Retta, outstanding writting.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
This is really well written, Love the last stanza.


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