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Why Don't You Catch Me When I Fall?
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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The moon rose casting its silvery hue-

But it held no mystery for me,

I was far too blue…



I slipped today,

And though you were at my side,

You let me fall,

Barely turned around,

To see how I was…

It did something to me-

Cracked open a door

That had long been sealed shut.



You let me fall today,

And I suddenly remembered;

It wasn’t the first time-



I let you walk on,

Picked myself up,

Limped a little,

And broken-hearted,

Followed you.



But,

I got stronger too,

Because you let me fall today;

And I remembered a time,

When I meant enough to you

That you would catch me when I fell-

Hold me in your arms,

And kiss away the pain…





I remembered that we use to love each other,

And then I remembered,

The little things that went away…

The way you stopped holding my hand

When we walked on a summer’s eve-

The way you frowned instead of smiled,

When I called your name-

The way my gifts of Love were tossed aside,

And never used-

And your time away from me,

Became more precious,

Then our time together…



I remember now,

How I let you go-

Thinking your freedom,

Was worth the price of my happiness-

I remember thinking,

You might find your way back to me,

To us…



I remember now,

That I let you go-

And today you let me fall-

And I guess,

Were even…


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 Reviews of "Why Don't You Catch Me When I Fall?"
Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Girl, this is a keeper poem. You really got to me. Thanks for sharing it!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Reminds me of a saying: Marriages don't usually die from a blow-out, but from a small leak. This is so powerful, Retta!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
very touching write.....I know this all too well......glad I am not alone on this

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
A sad and touching piece. Beuatiful imagery
and verses. Great!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
It is always a pity when loves dies. A very sensitive poem.

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
When love dies it's often caused by a number of little things but no matter the pain is always there. Good poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
This is such a heartly write...this is touching and deep write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Good Morning, Retta
Excellent Write!
I am happy you bid him adeu!


tony

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
an excellent write

William

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Theresa...this is so good...why do they do that...let us fall? is that love? wow..girl you did good on this one..love it...Floria

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
He let you fall because he was not man enough....you let him go because you simply knew you were too good :) This is lovely...Teresa

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Rhetta.. This is a very stark reminder to us all. So sad.. this anatomy of love
Going down.. God.. such a write.
So sad... so true.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Reindeer,
This touched my heart ..a truly beautiful piece.
Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Made me cry, Rhetta. This is such a poignant write.


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