Stone Hearted (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

WOW!!!
WOW!!!
YOU TOLD HIM!!!
WOW!!!!

I love drama drawn from pain....its theraputic!!!
Wow....this is the best i mean it the BEST thing i have read today!!!!!

bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

You have such a great way with words! The emotion is felt very strongly in this write.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

this was a very sad and emotionally powerful poem I hope all is well with my friend sincerly a good friend of yours

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Very powerful emotional write... Intensity in every word..
Good things can come from bad... Weak excuse I know but it is true.

Drop me,

Stone that I am,

And watch me float

To the bottom and sink mercifully

Into oblivion….

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Beautiful though sad.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

a very powerful, emotional and well expressed poem. Excellent.
Chrissie

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Oooooh, owie! Powerful words my dear! Teresa

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

this one's like throwin 'em solid rock stone!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

your poetic buoyancy will save you... very well written...

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Wow! Powerful write. Intense expression here.

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Each verse more powerful than the last... and way too easy to relate to.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Yikes, I know this feeling all too well. Excellent write about love bastards.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

POWERFUL, and full of determination. this was excellent!

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

very good!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

You have strength of your convictions to see this through, excellent write...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Didn't I tell you we were going to find you a new boyfriend ??? [smiles]

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

{{{{{{REINDEER}}}}}}}}}}}
Oh this is so depth and beautiful a write.
Smiles and hugs
and tears
Peggy

{{I am sdo glad you returned I missed you so when you were away.}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Intense write, my friend.
I hope all is well with you.
Hugggs

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Dear Retta, Today was not our day. I hope you do not have my ills. Your poetry as always was masterful.

yf
tony

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Well done Reindeer! I hope it is fiction.
Jack

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Agree...this is a great write of powerful emotions...