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Waltzing In The Moonlight
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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*A response to Sanil's Challenge*





The lovely moon rose,
In the starlight sky,
Setting the stage
For you and I…

I stood so still,
For I could hear,
The lovely melody
Whispering softly in the air.

I could see by the soft look
In your eyes,
You heard it too,
And we raised our faces to the sky…

Stood back to back,
Holding hands,
Feeling such joy,
Singing in my heart,
I felt as though
We should never part…

Then you begin to dance,
And my heart leaped at the chance
To be one with you once more,
To use the earth as our dance floor,
And you twirled me around,
To the beat of that lovely sound…

And we danced under the stars,
To the lovely melody of spring,
To the love we both chose to bring,
To the beauty of the night,
To the love that felt so right…

And on that lovely night,
I discovered I truly loved you,
And knew at last,
You loved me too…


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 Reviews of "Waltzing In The Moonlight"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
This is such a beautiful write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
a wonderful write I love all these dancing in the moonlight poem,
Excellen..... Reindeer

William

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
This is truly awesome poetry, it made my spirits soar to bliss!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
wnderful write ....

Loved the last lines ...
I discovered I truly loved you,
And knew at last,
You loved me too…

Enjoy writing friend ....
You did a marvellous work

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
aw this was so sweet and romantic what a fatnastic answer to the challenge nice job on it

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Retta this is special,beautifully written, very intimate...a most wonderful response

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
A wonderful poem from you.....then again....they always are ;)

A great answer to the challenge....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
This was an excellent response to the challenge. It was truly a romantic piece where two souls join in the moonlight...dancing the night away. I love the way you expressed love in this piece. Commendable work Rein! Jim

Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Beautiful write to add to the challenge. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Dear Retta, This write was different for you.
I liked this too.


yf
tony

Reviewed on April 1, 2003
So romantic....ahhhh.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Nice...

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
nice write. rhytmn & rhyme...great flow.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Retta...this is simply beautiful...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Beautiful write. It makes me want to get up and dance!


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