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A Walk In My Woods
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A Walk In My Woods…


I walk in my woods,
But they give me no comfort tonight.
Something is missing,
And I wonder if is me…
I feel so light,
My spirit rising,
To the top of my trees,
Without even trying,
And I keep hearing someone crying,
Sounding so lost,
I want to find them,
But I worry about the cost…
It is our way,
That if you save someone,
Then you must take on the burden
Of their care,
And I wonder if I dare,
Me,
Whose grip on life is so weak,
Dare I live for another,
When I can not see tomorrow?

Wishing it would never come,
That I never had to see the sun,
Rise again over my mountain,
Blaze in all its glory,
Mocking my sorrow…
Reminding me of my lost love,
Shall I never love another?

The leaves sway and whisper,
I hear but do not understand
The things they say,
It didn’t use to be this way,
What changed?
Who am I today?

This walk in the woods,
I thought would save me,
Thought I would see
The person I use to be,
But it is empty,
As empty as me…

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 Reviews of "A Walk In My Woods"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
It is haunting, a cool hurting slice-of-life.
Even those things we love so much, sometimes can't assuage our pain, but the love of our fellowmen often can. Jerry

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Beautifuly, sad

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Excellent write. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
sometimes haunting is the way we feel
I try not to dwell on the haunt.
Glad to read you again...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
You might of been hearing more then you think..........

Great write!

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Mocking my sorrow…
Reminding me of my lost love,
Shall I never love another?
brava well done...


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Crepy, but with a great flow..Good show

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
I agree with Elizabeth....It has a haunting feel....Simply divine...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Hi Retta, Excellent Write!



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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Retta, I hope this is fiction. This oozes with so much pain, but very well written

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
What an experience. I find nature so soothing when I need to think or I am troubled. This is a lovely haunting poem.
Well done.


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