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Trapped By Love
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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A moment in time steps aside,
Parting a curtain only I could see,
Love's Lust abated by fear,
Twisted ramblings of a mind,
Locked in yesterdays dream...

I wake,
See you standing there,
Shadowed by the Sun,
Then you fade,
When the clouds hide the light,
And I weep bitter tears,
For the memories you left behind...

My friend,
Drags me out of the gloom,
Walks me in the sunlight,
Kicking Autumn's leaves,
Scattering them like teardrops,
That float gently to the ground...

Suddenly she whispers;
"He comes!"
And reaches for my hand,
Providing a link with which
To draw strength...

But-
You stop before me,
Yank our hands apart,
Crush me to your chest,
Burying your head in my hair...

Dear God,
I smell the grief you've gone through-
And as I stare into your eyes,
It is suddenly clear-

You will torture my soul for eons-
For I can no more stop loving you,
Then you can stop loving me-
I have found my limit,
And it is thee...


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 Reviews of "Trapped By Love"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
This one touches so deeply,great write

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
This hits home , I too have found my limit...beautiful Z

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
heart wrenching
josie

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Retta,
You do capture the soul feelings so well!
How I can relate to this one!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Reindeer,
This is superb writing that touches the soul
Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
That first stanza is so damn fine.....And the rest is just as brilliant...You have a soulful pen....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
such a graceful and tender, yet strong piece of work - well done!

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
A deeply touching wonderful write. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Retta, beautiful poem. A profound longing.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wonderful writing Retta

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
This one touches so deeply. One of the best I've ever read.

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wow! Powerful write Retta

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Good Morning, Retta
Wow, I loved this.It had a great ending.



yf
tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Reindeer,
"You will torture my soul for eons-
For I can no more stop loving you,
Then you can stop loving me-
I have found my limit,
And it is thee... "
tears this is beautiful
Peg

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Nicely done...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
sad write,
excvellently composed

William

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
this is evocative...i found myself lost in these words, envisioning the drama. you have a way with descriptive terms, poet...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Oh Retta...I know this feeling too well...careful dear!
(Thanks for your support;-)


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