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Walking In The Moonlight
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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* A Response to Sanil's challenge*




My love,
He pushes,
He prods,
He won’t stop,
Till we go for our walk…
Thinking it will drive the gloom
Out of my heart,
If he could just get me out of the room…

It is nightfall when I finally agree,
More to make him quiet,
Then any beach I want to see…
So we go hand in hand,
Though I am so mad at this man…

But the stars are out,
And I soon forget to pout,
For the moon is shinning down,
Lighting our path as we make our way around
The rocks and cracks,
And he tenderly touches my back,
To guide and save me,
Should I not see,
The crevice in front of me…

We finally reach the sand,
And the ocean is softly lapping the shores,
The fish are jumping tonight,
And I soon forget our fight,
As we walk along in the lovely moonlight…

Suddenly from the dark we hear a splash,
And see the pod of dolphins crash
Into the breaking waves,
And it is a picture I wish I could save,
For they are so beautiful as they play,
Can’t help but think what a lovely way
This is to end the day…

He turns and faces me,
And I look into his eyes and see,
How much love and hope he shows-
I love him…this he knows,
But just in case I tell him anyway,
“Thank you,” I whisper into his ear,
“For bringing me here…”

He does not say a word,
Merely lifted my chin to kiss
My waiting lips in the gentle mist
That sprays us both and I don’t miss
The rapid beating of his heart,
Knowing we shall never part,
“No matter what you ever do,”
I whisper softly,
“My heart belongs to you…”

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 Reviews of "Walking In The Moonlight"
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Rein--this piece of work was brilliantly written. I love the scene depicted here. This is surely a change for you and I love it. You should do more romantic poems. I love every word and I feel ever emotion. Thank you very much for sharing. You have lifted me greatly. LC

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Well Retta you sure did it girl...lovely poem..wonderful lines...floria

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
A lovely mixture of beauty and romance!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Great write my dear friend ... you really did a wonderful work with the challenge. Thanks for your kind participation


Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Retta, I just this one. Dolphins...my favorite thing in the ocean. What a beautiful poem!

Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Making up is always fun. I always say don't sweet the small stuff. loved this poem.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Nicely done !

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Great challenge reply. Excellent.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
I agree with Jim....What a gift for words you have.....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
a picture painted with your words...beautifully done

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
GM Retta,
This is great...
Well done job...

Trixie :)


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