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Who Is This Stranger?
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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My life a memory,
From which I can’t escape-
A hell that burns eternal,
Though the flame is hidden…
Smoldering like coals,
Hidden beneath the sand,
Melting it into lovely black glass,
That hides all reflections of me,
So there is nothing for you to see…

My life’s blood,
Trickles down my wrists,
And forms strange ink blots,
For those who came to see,
Who this stranger is,
Sitting in the chair,
Facing the window,
With the glorious view-

They circle the room,
Looking down,
Seeing shadows on the ground,
Trying to read meaning,
Into the red smears-
I smile as it becomes apparent,
They don’t know it’s me…

I watch with great sadness,
As a puddle forms,
And wonder if soon those
Who come to claim my bones,
Will track my blood through the rooms,
Leaving bits of me behind,
Or taking me along,
As they walk out the door-
And the puddle of blood,
Stops growing on the floor…




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 Reviews of "Who Is This Stranger?"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Retta, this is deep and so so sad. excellent emotions displayed

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Suicide is a sad answer for the end of one's life.
I've written about it too, but not meaning it.
Great dark poetry....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
A gripping piece of dark poetry...you do write with a powerful pen;-)beautiful in its starkness

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
this was a fantastic view of ourselves and what happens when we die you are so brilliant with this one it was wonderfully amazing nice job on this dark poem of deep thought

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Great write..

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Very chilling and intense...powerful.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Very chilling write Retta...written so well...floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Heart gripping raw emotive write of beauty.

Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
This was somewhat sad but a beautiful write
when you have time check my poem The Cluttered Closet,ok!

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
its a good poem a little heart tearing but a good poem

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Excellent! Simply EXCELLENT!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Horribly depressing imagery, but a very good poem.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Hi Retta, Greater than the last one.


yf
tony

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
This is terribly hurting, Retta. Get them all off of you. It will clean your soul and give you peace

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
very emotional Retta!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
This is deep, powerful, and bone-chilling.

Reviewed by Teresa Dybevik
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
I meant want...sorry, fast fingers today!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
This makes me wat to love so bad---I could literally craw under his skin and not feel too close :) Fantastic job! teresa


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