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I Remember You...
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Misty mornings often find me,
Gazing at the world,
From my mountain top;
Wondering how I got here,
From there…
Tracing back on which roads I took,
Seeing how far I strayed,
Just to smell the wild rose,
Or touch the withered trunk,
Of an ancient oak tree,
Sensing the strength and power
Of its century long memory,
Wondering what it would say,
If it could speak…

I remember,
Lying cradled in its massive arms,
Hearing its leaves sing me to sleep,
I felt safe there,
Knowing it would hold the secrets,
I whispered into its branches forever…

Maybe,
In fifty years,
Another child will dare,
To climb as high,
Feel as safe,
And with their fingers,
Trace an old scar,
Carved in sudden passion,
And overwhelming fear,
To be known, and remembered…

To have another soul,
Whisper the name written there in tears,
And know they are not alone…

Thus,
I return to my home,
High in the mountains,
Remembering a past,
That had no future,
Hearing the long forgotten songs,
Of the oak leaves singing once more,
Borne to me,
By a sympathetic wind,
And hear it whisper gently,
For me alone,
“I remember you…”


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 Reviews of "I Remember You..."
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
This is so very beautiful...I love every word of it...so serene....just outstanding!!!!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Enchanting and magical.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
i saw dryad as you described the tree...your words speak above and beyond consciousness.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Oh how tender this
one is...
So beautiful Reindeer

Trixie :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
this was so beautifully vivid and descriptive

Reviewed on April 17, 2003
So peaceful, so lovely.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Thanks for taking me there! Your writing is passionate, powerful and beautiful!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
You have such a lovely gift Reindeer...you really must get published. You never fail to take me away from here into a world of natural ways even in poems of strife it somehow seems better when you write about it!;-)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
A very beautiful write Reincer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Love the nature, imagery and words...you really have a gift Retta.

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Rein--you are truly a gifted poet indeed. If there's one thing I do know, it's the fact that you will never forget were you have came from. You do a great job of letting us readers know and understand that mere fact. Keep up the great work. You are just truly outstanding! LC

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
This was beautiful.......loved every stanza!!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Lovely..You are a true poet, my friend..!

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Wonderful imagery and very lovely

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
i know those oak tree songs

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
beautiful
well done

j+

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Outstanding poetry, Reindeer...breathtaking
Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
You do this so very well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Retta, this is awesome. Love the beauty of your words. You brought me to your secret mountain top and opened your feeling to me. Great job.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Reindeer, This has to be one of my favourites of yours! It just really spoke volumes to me. Thank You. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
This is breathtaking! I could feel the nature of the mountains and time through this write. Thank you!

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Retta,
I adore how your words include me where you are! Allowing me to be swept away to a place of grand, an envirement, both of us adore, your communion with what surrounds you, when painted to canvas, allows me to inhale its unmatched majesty as well, riding piggy back upon your words!Thank you Reindeer, methinks you are a talented writer and poet, and yes imbued in inspiration untold.
for your words so enchanting, and riding upon the breath of wind whispering...
Rodney Evan Bohen


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