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Beyond The Waterfall
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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I stand watching,
As you swim in the hidden pond,
Wondering what lies beyond,
Counting the days,
When we must leave,
Not wanting to abandon,
What we have found here…
I stand,
Behind the waterfall,
And it hides my tears,
Spraying my face,
With its soft embrace,
Watching you,
Loving you,
Knowing we belong here
Where the world is real,
Where I have learned to feel…

And the waterfall,
Flowing endlessly,
Crashing into the pond,
With such wild abandon,
Like my love for you,
Refilling the emptiness each day,
With renewed hope,
That we will take with us,
When we go on our way…

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 Reviews of "Beyond The Waterfall"
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
You brought me close to the waterfall, as close as I could feel the touch of it. Thank you, Retta.
Abdinoor

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
~ A natural born poet you are..

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Well done! Very intriguing. J.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
wow..clap clap clap...great write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Beautiful words Reindeer, beautiful,
excellent write

William

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Beautiful... This hope that can be refilled.. renewed.. Bravo

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
renewed hope, something we all need
Water falls are one of my favorites
you are too, Reindeer

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
How beautifully written. This is a masterpiece. WOW!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
a delight to read and experience!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Beautiful...the waterfall sounds heavenly. Water is a carrier of energy.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Gosh an excellent kinda tribute..

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
you capture your intended expression very well m'lady

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Beautiful expression of your love. Who is the lucky one? ;o)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Dear Retta, You have the verse of an angel.

love yf
tony

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
You write such unique and lovely poetry, Retta.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
beautiful splashing write Retta!!!
a waterfall of tranquility can heal stormy emotions....
Love
tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Simply superb!


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