Cast Ashore (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

so many images I saw in this one.
it roared like the ocean

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

This is so deep. I had to read it a couple of times to get all the aspects of this write. Excellent job!!!!

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Reindeer, this precious poem speaks volumes! Great job.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Very touching, Retta.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

shame this sounds like my "Gulloyster Seagull"

Very chilled write dear Retta!!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Chills... I can see his in my minds eye.. Can't get better !! Congrats on this write.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

It speaks volumes....

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

what a great write...short but to the point...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Fantastic terse poem Reindeer...has the power of an atom!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

for a mini-poem, it says mouthfuls...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Short but powerful..

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

A bear is hungry?
Great piece of work.....

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Dear Retta, first of all, i am sorry i have not been a reviwer. I really have been ver ill. I feel better now, even after reading your dark poetry. Simply written you are the best!

love yf
tony

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Retta,
Kool cute oceanic write
short and excellent

William

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Oh Reindeer, the imagery and verbage is outstanding.
par excellence
Peg

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

OH yeah..definitely relationships..

Rein

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Ohhhh Noooo. Say it ain't soooooooo.
Short and horror...and you have it under 'relationships'.....gawd. hahahahah.
Bravo. [I think...]

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Retta,
Clicking claws scuttle forward,

Grand line! Outstanding...
I liked!
Rodney