Tasting Death (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by xxx xxx (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2003

yes yes. that guy jimmy put his finger on it. you take moments and bring them to life. so real

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Rein--This poem was fantastic! I am amazed at how you take actual moments and put them into black and white to make the reader feel and learn. Your work is truly exceptional! LC

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Very emotional and touchy write...well done...clap clap...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Very emotional

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Great rhyme.......
Fantastic write....

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Wow, beautifuly done, very loving and wise write. :)
~Kari~

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

i waited til late, to read this, the title frigtened me a bit. but i am glad that i finally did.
you are a generous friend, indeed.
there is a living death in mourning and in giving up. your heart has shown to be one of great empathy and caring.
good job
hugs
krissy

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Very unselfish. I am impressed. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Fear not the taste of death my dearest sweet poet friend...you and I do both know it is only the begining to an end! Another splendid write!!!!
((((HUGS))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Moving write, very good.

Nancy

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

powerfully moving! a poet to admire...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

A very wise and loving write.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

4-27-03

I Do Not Fear Tasting Death, I Welcome It With Open Arms, Only Then Will You Ever Be Free From This Holy Hell,i.e Should You Leave This World Before Death!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Reindeer no matter your topic you always do a superb write, the imagery in this is outstanding!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Dear Retta, Lovely Rhyme, actually i should say great. The poem is lovely because it shows what a beautiful caring person you really are.

love yf
tony

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Outstanding Retta
Excellent write

William

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

A wonderful, touching piece Reindeer.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Wow, this is really encouraging. Very good write.
- J -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

geez this is like a refrain to my own write I just posted...this is stunning....gee but not so easy to open that door....it damn hard don't you think...You touched me with this one.....(njanies-kupela)african word for < < for sure >>

Love
tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Retta, the taste of death are so bitter. To call for him to open the door before he succumbs with her waiting there to revive him with love is the only thing to do. Right? Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

I swear! This is simply an amazing, bloody fine poem! The pace and placing of your rhymes is gorgeous.. I felt completely involved reading this.. as I do when in the presence of a wonderful writer! Just wonderful, Retta. Oh, yes! katy.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Hi Reindeer,
Another outstanding write..

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Reindeer,
this touched me so beautiful work
Love Peggy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Ahhh Retta, you are another poet who never disappoints. Well done. Sad topic but well done.