Shadows In The Garden (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

TERRIFIC! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

WOW Rhetta what dark sorrowed haunting imagery...FANTASTIC!
(((((((HUGS)))))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Such a sad write. You've done a beautiful job with this

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

What imagery !!!!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

~ MASTERPIECE ~

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

"And I wept,
Then used its leaves to wipe away the tears,
And used its rough bark to scrape away
The last memory of you from my soul…"

*sigh* i felt these words go straight to my heart... Beautiful sadness :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Very powerful and moving!

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

i had a tree like that too...they are wonderful creatures as is this poem!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Wow. Awesome writing.
Nature does heal. I am learning more and more.
John

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Wow! Very powerful writing indeed!! You young Lady have a divine mind! Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

An oustanding piece, Reindeer...I'm in awe of your writing.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Retta, well done. That was a bit eerie. A ghost from the past.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Lisa this is a wonderful write
Excellent,
Today everyone is writing either sad or dark, including myself, of all days ,
the sun is shinning upon us, as never fore.
my next write will be a joyous one "bet"

William

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Sad write but heart touching,,nature seems to protect us all,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Retta,

Then used its leaves to wipe away the tears,

And used its rough bark to scrape away

The last memory of you from my soul…
Rodney

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Nature the greatest healer of all. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Good Morning, Retta
Wow this is a powerful writing. You filled it with much emotion. I love your writings immensely.

ty yf
tony