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My Wall
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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My Garden,

Surrounded by Stone Walls,

So tall, so thick,

You wonder what mason worked this magic

Without using brick.



You try to peer through the cracks,

But my stones are true ,

And hide me from you.



You may be surprised to know,

That each stone can stand alone,

Each stone so carefully chosen,

By a child’s hand,

or a young woman’s heart eternally frozen.



Stones that are true , hard, and pure.

Stones that made promises

They have kept for centuries

And now keep for me.



They stand between the world and I,

Teaching us not to cry,

Tears that went unshed so long,

It only served to make us strong.

It doesn’t even matter what went wrong,





Its over now, the choice made,

The life I left,

The life you failed to save…

Stands on the other side,

You can’t get to me,

It’s useless to try.



You may not look here-

You may not visit-

You may touch my wall,

But you’ll never touch me.


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 Reviews of "My Wall"
Reviewed by xxx xxx (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
wonderful beauty always has a simplicity that belies the fine craftsmanship underneath. this is beautiful truly beautiful....you are that nice reindeer i have seen in fireside arent you lol

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
Good Job Retta!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
A stunning piece Reindeer. Bravo
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
Remarkable write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
This is a remarkable piece of work.
I especially like this part:
"Each stone so carefully chosen,
By a child’s hand"
Awesome! I can relate to this. 30 years of a tall thick wall, and no one is getting in!
Jacqueline

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Retta,
Sister, I liked this piece a whole bunch ok? I liked the way it was hung,and spun, it fell nicely like a fine garmentfalls and collapses round a pretty ladies shoulders, yes nicely woven,nicely done, thank you
Rodney

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
sometimes we surround ourselves to prevent being hurt... we must break down our own walls to let the sun shine in...

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Hi Reindeer,
Fantastic write...
I could relate...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Excellent write Reindeer, I love your rhyme and flow...the strongest wall is that of the will, for only we can let one through it....

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
so sad Reindeer. a poem well done

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Stunning strength you show..Beautiful power and light in you Retta..

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Retta
a wonderful write
Excellent

William

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Dear Retta, Yes you are amazing your writing is excellent.


yf
tony

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Bravo!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
The view from stone walls can be amazing.....Another excellent poem..the depth of your thinking is fantastic.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
well done


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