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And Our Spirits Shall Rise
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And Our Spirits Shall Rise…


We two,
Bonded for all eternity,
Not even death,
Shall separate our souls,
For you and I,
Have shared our blood,
Mixed our souls,
And became one…

Your fierce spirit,
Calls to me,
Through our unborn child,
And I feel him stir,
When you call my name,
And rise,
Like Shema,
That gentle spirit of the mountain,
That protects us all…

I come to you,
No matter where you are,
Your love shows me the way,
And here I shall stay,
By your side,
Until the end of our days…

For I will not stay here alone,
When your spirit travels on,
So shall I,
And we together,
Shall roam the night,
Under the hunter’s moon,
Together for all time.


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 Reviews of "And Our Spirits Shall Rise"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2006
I WAS BROWSING THROUGH YOUR POETRY TODAY..How did I MISS this one*..It's stupendous..love it.. saved it!! YES!!
Thankyou Retta..I simply love your work..


vesna:)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
this is a gorgeous write Reindeer, and the pic is awesome

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
beautiful, just beautiful!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
The power of their love can be felt from beginning to end and forever. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
I love this Reindeer...I feel it in my soul;-)you write with such spirit!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Oh Geeze! I love this! I believe that there are souls who eternally travel together, their only parting is in the physical death, until they are born again, and meet in the next life. The pic. you chose with this is really beautiful!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
True love is everlasting. It's a beautiful thought shared by many and you put it so well. Love the picture too.
Sandy

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Riendeer
beautiful is another one of your writes
Excellent

Wiilaim

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
outstandingly beautiful!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Rhetta,
This is astounding...I love the imagery, the romantic tedriling...just everything about it sings LOUDLY. May your spirits forever soar above in Galun' lati!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Reindeer, Peaceful, beautiful, romantic and spiritual. Very nice! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Absolutely beautiful, Reindeer.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Retta,
Very nicely done, new flavor, taste and color
Very nice, nice flow
Rodney

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
awesome write Retta !!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Absolutely gorgeous, Retta.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Retta, love the Native American feel of this one. Spirits will wander together.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Another peyote dream like Roberts, good stuff.

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Rein--this poem was absolutely wonderful! I loved the way you expressed the fact that you two will be together forever (even after the end of your physical days). I love it so very much! LC

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Reindeer,
This is stunning so beautiful
"For I will not stay here alone,
When your spirit travels on,
So shall I,
And we together,
Shall roam the night,
Under the hunter’s moon,
Together for all time."
Peggy

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Reindeer,
your spirit through your pen is so uplifing and beautiful!!

Peace, Dove

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Dear Retta, Gorgeous write! As lovel as your inner core.


tony

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Wow...this goes to the top of my favorites list. Bravo. Love that picture too.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
this is true love dedication
awesome write Retta
beautiful picture...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
spirits that rise together stay together... very well written...


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